Title: Harry Potter The Dark King
Author: Night Wanderer
Pairing: None yet.
Rating: M
Genre:Action/Adventure/Horror
Status: Only 4 chapters but in progess. (14747 words so far.)
Sumary:
Harry Potter is sick of people controling his life, and he is coming back with a venagance. Very Evil!Harry, might be Super!Harry.

LINK

So far its pretty damn good if your looking for a evil Harry story. If you looking for a story where Harry turns on everyone I would recommend this one.

Edit: LINK FIXED. Vash

 

the first chapter has left me asking WTF?????????????. It has no relations to canon other than the names of the charcters....

 

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First chapter had me thinking the same thing.

 

fix the goshdarn link first.

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2215221/1
is it really that hard?

 

apparently, since urs is wrong too

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2215221/1/

 

It was pretty good.
The dark transformation was very rushed, it have to take at least 8000 words for the transformation between light and dark takes place to make it trustworty..
It's Crucio not curico GRRR! Do guys like this only read the books once :?

 

yeah, seen alot of authors lately, that can't seem to spell Crucio correctly :x. Regardless, I like it, but I'm kinda impartial cuz i'm looking for good dark!harry fics.

It's a little rushed and the chapters are a bit too short for my liking, but I just like a good long monster chapter of 20k words , but alas, no such luck.

 

Wow...
Was this guy serious?
Curico?
Is that like... some kind of asian cuisine?
This story has potential, a lot of potential that is rarely seen in stories these days. But for it has, it is dragged down by the atrocious grammar and its hastiness, not to mention how cliche the author uses the plot. Those first four chapters could have and should have been extended to at least seven chapters and the magic, particulary the rituals, could have been done better. In my opinion, Harry was cheating on how he got so powerful so quick, which many authors do do, but this author was just... ruined all my funk on this night!

However, on that note, I did like the story and it is a shame that the author abandoned it. I'm tempted to email him/her and ask for permission to continue and FIX it. Any thoughts on that?

 

Yeah! Im sure you could make it much better...
Your story, "Black God, White Devil" is it posted on ff.net? I tried to search it, but it didnt work..so I dont know how good you are.

Could you send me the link? Please :mrgreen:

 

No, its not posted yet. I still wanted to refine what I have before I post it. Don't want facts in the story to clash later on down the line, so I am taking my time with it for now. The first act (this won't be your typical story) will begin being released next month, around the 15th.

 

I was just reading this and i think that i have read it before. Pretty sure i thought it medioca at best, besides the fact that it hasn't been updated in like 7 months, we can excuse the fact that it was clinche back then with original idea's few and far between.

 

I like this story even if Harry becomes super powerful much to fast. There is also next to no information on how he became so powerful.

 

I have taken this story up and will be rewriting lots of it. Cliches will be reworked into something more original. His power boosts will be more in depth and realistic, as magic goes least ways, etc. I might have the first chapter out by the end of the month... or the end of next week. It depends. Look for it.

 

This story is pretty interesting if you ask me. And although it is rushing way too fast for my tastes I guess I can't complain too bad. I just hope that it gets another update soon. If your taking over, I look forward too it.

 

Good point

 

I like this story even if it is rushed, Harry has trained for 2 months but has become some super wizard in that time. There is also the numerous cliches...

 

Hmm... The grammar is horrible, the spelling is bad in most places and this has more holes in it than a target at a firing range. *turns to the author* Let me show you MY favorite curse...
*concentrates*
Nihilus!

 

This is a good story but it goes to fast and doesn't have enough detail about what harry has been doing in his training

 

That right there sums up all the issues with the story!!!

Its too fast!!!

Where did all the time go?

In a house that creates a time lapse so Harry can train in less then three months to be stronger the Voldielocks?

Time ladies and... well ladies!

Time.