mm I perfer his other works over this one, but Its still good enough for me to read and not cringe like a lot of ff.net's crap.

 

I dont think that SilverAegis deleted the chapter himself, cause some of my bookmarked stories on ff.net got some chaps deleted too. Maybe ff admins are now deleting only the chaps they dont like instead of the whole stories

 

Heh, that would be an absolute gift if they were; makes sense and saves a lot of trouble. Wait a minute... this is the nazi admins we're talking about, they wouldn't think of something PRACTICAL would they? *scratches head* Might just be wistful thinking...

 

Why would they do that? Do these people have any guidelines on what to delete?

 

Chapter 8 is out now and it's about the 1st task. It's more or less like the canon task with the exception that Cedric didn't manage toget his egg. But I like this story and hope he'll update soon.

 

While I like the story so would I have liked it better if Lily hadent gotten the egg by using a broom, it was just in chapter 7 or maybe 6 that she told harry that she was not on the quiddith team and dident even have her own broom but then suddenly is she flying extremly well.

 

At the very begining of the story it said that she flew very well but refused to play on the quidditch (sp?) team no matter who asked her.

 

While at first, I hated the story because he ruined the pairing, I find that it is a nice, easy read.

It's a nice fluffy break from the heavy evil stories I'm used to.

 

couldnt read this
to bad to be good to good to be bad.
neither here nor there.
you get the picture
btw is this red thing new. i ddint notice it till very recently

 

weird, i never manage to read this author s writing...it makes me cringe somewhat...ah well, and it's not very innovative.

 

By the way it's she not he.
I like her stories if I ignore the whole huge fluffy part.

 

i think that this is an ok story but it frustrates me sometime when he says the same thing 3 times using different wording in the same paragraph it just makes me want to go and change it to make it an easier read.

 

ive just read the first chapter and it is promisimg the whole harry/twin other realty thing is a bit disturbing but on the whole it is ok as far iam concerned lily being abandoned by all her friends then along comes harry is nice touch the author has got this story going this right at least as far iamm concerned lily has not got a ron who is bespotted by a girl who lived live ginny with harry (boy who bloody who lives) she hqs noone except admires then harry whop comes along then hey prestow a friend when you need one this is one story i will keep ian eye on in the future

 

erm..what?

*Raises bullseye for DIEGINNYDIE*

 

Someone get that kid a Beta.

 

I have been following this story since it first came out, and I must say that it is a pretty good story even though I wish the chapters were longer.

 

I myself liked it, though I was a little skeptical at first. But I agree he could use a Beta, or even a good spell-checker.

 

This is the first Harry/Girl!Harry I've seen and what I've read so far of it I really like. Go SiverAegis!

zEROfrustration

 

WHOOPS sorry about the spelling i forgot there was a spell check on this, i wrote that up after i had a bit of a drink but apart from spelling i stand by my review everything in the story fit's just right i'am waiting to see if lily and herry go to the ball together and what the bumblebee say's about harry and all that

 

I think we're more looking for some punctuation or maybe even properly placed capital letters.

Though props for trying with i'am and fit's.