Me too...
uke:

 

I read this story a while ago and I thought at the beginning this would be somewhat interesting but then there was this whole Harry/Harrygirl thing ...make it look like insest...
Not the best work from SilverAegis but nevertheless worth a try

 

I myself am a fan of Aegis' writing, as I like the writing style. I just think that the majority of the content needs work. Like the some plot points being a bit hard to belive, OTT etc. But, if any of you like good reads, try Gabriel by Shikatanai, Faith by Dragongirl16 or Harry Potter and the Four Realms by Daphne Li. The first and last are AU, but well written.

 

Dude, you need help. Welcome to the family.

 

Anyway, I actually like this story, no matter what you mofos say.

Its got an interesting plot, and I like to see what Harry's going to do different.

Oh yeah, I liked how SIlver Aegis has him play a flute instead of a violin or some other cliche. It does make more sense according to cannon. Hagrid gave him that flute in first year, plus Harry was an adult in his dimension, so it's not an instantaeous musical genius cliche,

Overall, a good story. Still waiting for an update, though.

 

yeah i know, but that's the first thing that came to mind when i read the summary..

Once past the creeping factor ( and it took some time) i admit the story is decently written.

That said try to imagine yourself in harry' shoes. Personnally, i couldn't stand a female v ersion of me, much less banging her/me/whatever... *brrrr*
uke:

 

I really thought this was a step down from silver aegis's other writing, before they were o.k. with fics such as shadow mage that were relatively interesting but this is bleh, not gooda at all.

 

The Morrigu go read the rules you sig is to big.

 

DarkTosser: Is there a reason that you've got someone else's fic in your sig?

Silver Aegis...his stories are okay, but I ahve to confess that his wrting prowess sucks the fat one. It reads like a 10 year old's work.

His body was so hot it should be illegal!

I mean, seriously...what the fuck. For a seasoned author to write like this...heh.

 

Just wondering, does this squick factor also apply to my Harry/Jamie (Fem/Harry) story?

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While the author isn't doing the best he/she could, I still enjoy the story alot - it's a light read.

 

Good Question... i hadn't post in a while and i have absolutely no idea where it comes from... :?: In fact, i don't even remember ever reading that fic. *shrug*
Well I erased everything...

 

Perhaps it is a LITTLE disturbing. The whole Lily/Harry thing.....its like incest...just worse.... but I do think that the plot is good. Just OTT as I stated before. One thing I dont like in fics where they make everything out to be perfect. (Ie when Lily is decribed to have the perfect body after taking the potions), its just really unrealistic. I mean, like 20& of people would say 'I have a perfect body'. I personally have no qualms in writing character who dont have perfect figures, it is more in with the real world not the celebrity style.

 

This is a pretty good story. I like the Harry/Lily thing. Its wierd I know, but for some reason I like it.

 

Thats er...different. Lol!

 

I like his plot ideas and the pairing doesn't bother me at all. But the perfectness factor really annoys me. Oh and Yarrgh! hit it right on the head with his writing style, i havn't actually been able to figure out why i disliked it until now.

 

I have only read the first 3 chapters and I wasnt too impressed. I didnt like it how quickly Harry revealed all, although I think the timing was right. (that sounds like a contradiction, I know, its hard to explain what annoyed me about that) I think that the fact that a AU travel fic that gives an author licence over Harry's poweres so easily is quite hard for me read. The original explanation of Harrys powers was fine, but he was then sucked into the darker side of magic. Otherwise I quite enjoyed. Perhaps just my neurosis for my complaints.

 

*No matter what anyone else may Think*


I really think this is a good story there are a few things I could question but as far as I can tell this is really good

Plus the fact that if you don't like the story nobody is making you read it:

 

It Seems Like Lily Is His Mother's Name