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Harry Potter: The Shadow Mage by SilverAegis - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by cmuylistoooo, Dec 4, 2005.

  1. Cervus

    Cervus Raptured to Hell

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    Not here it didn't. In England and Wales you have to be over 16 to have homosexual (gay) or heterosexual (straight) sex. In Northern Ireland you have to be 17 to have homosexual or heterosexual sex. However, if you're a consenting couple and around the same age as each other, it's unlikely you'd be prosecuted of sexual assualt (although if one of you is under 13 this might not be the case).

    However...

    People trusted to look after you like teachers, carers and doctors are in a position of trust. It’s illegal for them to have sex with under-18s in their care.
     
  2. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Ok, that seems about right more or less...

    Back on topic...

    Anyone notice the angel girl's got the same name as the female character on Gundam Seed Destiny...

    Unless you have a bias towards H/Cho like some...I didn't like it much, and he probably should just concentrate on one story as all of them seem similar.
     
  3. boghi8462

    boghi8462 Backtraced

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    Quote: -A/N: I have written an uncut version of the dirty scenes if anyone wants to read it. Many readers have been demanding me to find a way for them to read it, and I decided that if you want to read it, go to the on my profile SilverAegis. To reach my story however, you have to login as a member I think. I changed what I said about you e-mailing me. I wasn’t expecting so many e-mails. So I changed it.- End Quote​

    There are no links towards nasty uncut versions. I doubt that there are any on ff.net with so many purges. Also, ficward is down for the near future, if not longer. Do you have any other links towards SilverAegis's stories? Preferably with nasty uncut versions attached.
     
  4. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Ficwad was the only place I knew of. Im wanting to say that theres only one scene that was uncut.
     
  5. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    This one needs to be removed from the Library or deleted entirely.

    The manga elements aside (which are, for me, enough to condemn the story alone), the writing sucks too much. The mechanism is too poor, it makes it physically painful to read.

    The writing is so bad it actually works to the story's advantage. Think about that. Think about the gems that surface due to the failtastic grammar.

    For those, 1/5.
     
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  6. slasheh

    slasheh Seventh Year

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    necro!!!!

    Seriously, if it bugs you that much simply pm a mod to delete it or to move it. Don't necro the shit out of it to remind us of our shame ;)
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    A necro is only annoying when people want updates for a certain story, which I doubt is the case for one written this poorly.

    If anyone was actually waiting for one for this, please let me know. I owe all of you an apology for making you think there was an update for this story.
     
  8. Mage

    Mage Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    I agree with Andromalius here, I personally had forgotten it was even in the Library. It's not fair to the story to have it deleted because one person doesn't like it; however, it should be re-rated since it's so old. I would give it a 2/5 since it now seems so outdated. At the time it was a so so read, now it just sucks though. The grammar is terrible and the ideas in it aren't good. I'd recommend deleting it.
     
  9. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    I have no problem with re rating a few stories each week, but I feel we should do a even handed section (all stories from month x, year y) rather than cherry pick a few "memorable loser"

    Silver started out with some promise, and just stopped cold and dropped off the Harry Potter Fan Fiction planet, but there is some worse dreck in the library I would think. How many stories left in the last purge?
     
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