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Harry's Madness by Silverlocke980 - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by MrINBN, Jun 3, 2005.

  1. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I've had this one booked for awhile, it starts off decently enough, but quickly goes off into a world of its own, and becomes too outlandish =(
     
  3. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    To each his/her own.
     
  4. Piccaboo!

    Piccaboo! Second Year

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    I read a few chapters of this but no. Way outa line, soo booring. Totally agree with Midknight on this one.

    This is basicly Harry becomes an evil insane bloodthirsty 'Joker', manipulates DA members to join him in insanity, they all get super powers - yeah you know where its headed... right for the trash bin.
     
  5. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    I read the authors page...

    Decided that I didn't feel like reading bible-thumpin rhetorical writing.
     
  6. Tinder

    Tinder Seventh Year

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    The first few chapters of horror are fairly enjoyable if you like that sort of thing, but once it turns into armies and wars and stuff I just got totally turned off. I like my Potter small-scale.
     
  7. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    This is simply to wierd to be allowed to live.
     
  8. MrINBN

    MrINBN Unspeakable

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    If ya don't like it, don't read it. Admitted, this is a somewhat bland story later.
     
  9. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    first... i dun think there is any HP/Tonks in here... not enough to be considered a pairing anuyway... second... its an eh story.. good but not great... last.. lets not bump months old topics..
     
  10. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    I had found this long ago. It rapidly deterioted and I stopped reading. No more word are needed.
     
  11. Aura

    Aura Seventh Year

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    The beginning was good but it eventually grew that it had no semblance to HP anymore...
     
  12. DR

    DR Secret Squirrel –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Good at first......


    Boooooring later....

    Definetly NOT the best thing since sliced bread.....
     
  13. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    This story was good in the beginning, and as for the war thing I didn't mind seeing as he could at least write battle scenes. I, at that time, had nothing to read either so that was teh best for me.

    It does become weird, but it is a decent story so an eh good not great. I would've bookmarked the story but his profile scared the ever-loving shit out of me...DO NOT READ HIS PROFILE ITS FREAKY.
     
  14. Rain

    Rain Pirate Navigator of the 7 Seas

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    It was actually the first HP story I had ever read, to be entirely truthful. I even read the Harry Potter books just to be able to understand what the hell they were talking about.

    Unfortunatly, lol, after reading the books I couldn't stand the story in the slightest, but hey! At least it did one good thing for me. I was able to drag myself out of the festering hole that is the DBZ fandom.

    I don't think it's a bad story, just.. well, not good. I can't stand wasted potential. *nods*
     
  15. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I agree with Ip... weird.
     
  16. Patrik f

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    While I like it in the beginning so does things go to fast. Once the DA was
    formed into an army within the Forbidden Forest so should they have trained for far longer then they did instead of just giving them super powers.

    There are also far to many people in the beginning, 10 000 students at
    Hogwarts is just unrealistic.

    While good in the beginning so now is it just a weird story that I at times check if it has been updated.
     
  17. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    This was the very first dark harry story i ever read and it got me into this sort of fics so i cant be too harsh with it however it did start going rather ott with bits and just being plain laughable in others, neville with a orb sticking out of his forehead for example. want to still love this fic but theres just so many better ones.
     
  18. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    mine too. first dark harry fic for me. it is a little bit rushed but it opened a new window for me to look at HP fanfic world.
     
  19. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Freaky Christian evangelists! *shivers* As well as many others, apparently, this was my first dark Harry fic, so I respect it for that, but it has so many outlandish ideas that...well...for example, full-scale wars being fought? Come on!

    Anyways, this is on my favorites so that I may help others see the light and error of their ways and cross the line into salvation with dark Harry!

    *walks away twitching paranoidly, muttering about freaky Christian evangelists*
     
  20. Litha Riddle

    Litha Riddle Banned DLP Supporter

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    I thought this story sucked donkey balls. I wish christians would go and live in a bloody comune somewhere and not bother us decent evil people with there crap. I usually like to give 'em a pinch of salt.....in their open wounds.
    Anyone got any lions,
    Litha
     
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