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HELP AT FIC

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by solidus, Sep 3, 2009.

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  1. solidus

    solidus Backtraced

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    Sep 5, 2009 #21
    I just posted the first chap of my intended story.perspicacity I would appreciate it if you checked it out.Its called Demon Within.

    ---------- Post automerged at 12:28 PM ---------- Previous post was at 12:26 PM ----------

    Nothing at all I was just trying to explain how one of the characters traits.
     
  2. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sep 5, 2009 #22
    If he loathes "the white man", the fuck is he doing in England?
     
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  3. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Sep 5, 2009 #23
    ^that.

    I mean its not like England is totally sun deprived with the overcast and clouds most of the year.

    Oh wait.

    Also. Use the goddamn space bar. It is to put spaces between words and punctuation. Such as commas and periods. I mean its not like you dont know how, you've got space between your words but somehow a period or comma shows up and it's "oh noes i no know how 2 do dis."
     
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