I just posted the first chap of my intended story.perspicacity I would appreciate it if you checked it out.Its called Demon Within.

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Nothing at all I was just trying to explain how one of the characters traits.

 

If he loathes "the white man", the fuck is he doing in England?

 

^that.

I mean its not like England is totally sun deprived with the overcast and clouds most of the year.

Oh wait.

Also. Use the goddamn space bar. It is to put spaces between words and punctuation. Such as commas and periods. I mean its not like you dont know how, you've got space between your words but somehow a period or comma shows up and it's "oh noes i no know how 2 do dis."