Lol, look at the youngin' throwing heat at Averis. I can't even get mad, because objectively, Averis' story does sound like a sack of shit.

But it's Averis, so we know better. Which leads us to your OP, OP; you seem smart, so you couldn't have honestly thought that you'd get any cooperative feedback on your query, based on that description. The plot sounds like fuckery, you don't remember the author, and you mentioned the word "goddess." You might as well have said "Merlin."

I think you'd be better off letting this one go.

 

Is it your story? You are arguing so hard for a shitty plot.

 

If it were his story he wouldn't be looking for it in story search.

 

^ It would be the most convoluted way of trying to subtly promote your own work I've ever seen if that was the case. :awesome