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Complete His Wyrda by EmeraldArya - M - Eragon [Inheritance Cycle]

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Scott, Dec 6, 2008.

2.7999999523163/5, 5 votes
  1. Scott

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    Dec 6, 2008 #1
    Title: His Wyrda
    Author: EmeraldArya
    Rating: M
    Genre: Romance/Hurt/Comfort
    Pairing: Eragon/Arya
    Chapters: 11
    Words: 35,673
    Updated: September 8, 2008
    Published: August 14, 2008
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Set after Eldest in Ellesmera, this is the story of Eragon and Arya's struggling relationship as the war rages on around them. Eventually Eragon/Arya. Rated M for violence/ torture scenes and a lemon or two.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4472971/1/His_Wyrda

    One of the very few Inheritance fics out there that are readable, at least imo.


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  2. Another Empty Frame

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    Jun 25, 2015 #2
    The romance part is poorly done, and the characterizations feel flat.

    The Hurt/Comfort part also fails to be anything other than predictable and seems like a cheap attempt to shock/grab attention by having Arya raped, and Eragon witnessing it when in her mind.

    2/5