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Abandoned Immortal by Lutris Argutiae - T~M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by Lutris, Oct 14, 2006.

  1. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Wheres the next chapter at?
     
  2. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    I took it down for the time being... If you want to read the atrocity, then PM me.
     
  3. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    your shit is still better than 75% of the authors best stuff..
     
  4. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    he means that literally by the way. He means Lutris that if you were to post images of your feces, it would still be better than 75% of authors' "best stuff."

    So, go sit on the throne, and don't forget your digital camera :D
     
  5. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Now this little baby will grow up to be a well worthy story to hold the title of Dark Harry! i must beg to you Lutris that you get the next chapter up so as i can go beck to fantising that there's still quality Dark Harry fic's out there
     
  6. mcfeedfest

    mcfeedfest Guest

    The fic itself was good but it wasn't what i was looking for at the moment so I wasn't all that interested in it.
     
  7. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    alright your new so i guess you get a pass. When you post, especially about a story, try and be constructive. Don't just say "it was good
    or "it was bad,"" say i really liked this, however, i didn't like that."
     
  8. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Did he ever put up the chapter he took down?
     
  9. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    mcfeedfest and then another user's name is mccatrage. Okay...it's a little weird after the Erised, Nagini, Hungry Basalisk fiasco.

    Anyways, have you changed the second chapter yet, or are you still working out the kinks?
     
  10. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    I'm completely reworking it. Reorganizing plot ideas that I have now deemed too cliche, and the rest of the mumbo.

    So, to put a little spin on things, I think I lied in the A.N.

    The next chapter will be in Tom's PoV, if that encourages you to wait a little bit longer.
     
  11. SushiZ

    SushiZ Auror

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    Great Story, continue to update please.
     
  12. Eleanor

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    I've read the story and I agree with everyone who complimented this. It really has started well and I especially enjoy the originality. I love Tom in this and Fawkes perception was interesting. I like the writing style and how you used the time breaks to separate the scenes.

    The memory spell explanation seems a little made-up-on-the-spot but it serves the purpose :D It will be interesting to see what happens with two Voldemorts.

    Hopefully your chapter will be up soon and up to standards with the others ;)I'm sure it will be.
     
  13. Lophaetus Occipitalis

    Lophaetus Occipitalis First Year

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    A very good start. I hope for more in the future.
     
  14. Grubdubdub

    Grubdubdub Supreme Mugwump

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    I know there's no rule against necro'ing in the library, but there are against stupidity.
     
  15. Lucullus

    Lucullus High Inquisitor

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    There's no rules against necroing in the Library provided the post is actually constructive.

    Lophaetus' one definitely isn't.
     
  16. Red Aviary

    Red Aviary Hogdorinclawpuff Prestige DLP Supporter

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    But while it is up at the top of the list, what's the status of this story?
     
  17. fuubar

    fuubar Headmaster

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    It has one chapter that was posted in 2006... Let's use a little bit of common sense and take a guess at what the current status is ok?
     
  18. Innomine

    Innomine Death Eater Prestige DLP Supporter

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    Its more the fact that this is the second or third time he has done this.
     
  19. Voice of the Nephilim

    Voice of the Nephilim Death Eater DLP Supporter

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    Or one could venture onto his FF page where it clearly states he's not writing for HP anymore.
     
  20. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    It's actually dead. So.

    College apps and studying and desperately trying not to fail kinda puts a dampener on the fun stuff. That and I don't particularly enjoy writing fanfic anymore.