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Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Sepanto, Dec 29, 2005.

  1. Sepanto

    Sepanto Groundskeeper

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    I want to make ron adn hermione betray harry in an unreedeemable way, do you guts have any idea. one thing i thought of was turning the DA against him and telling them stories of his evil. tnx.
     
  2. Mordecai

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    my friend says that they ought to betray harry by becoming a couple, because according to my friend Harry sooooo obviously wants to have it off with Ron. Don't ask is all i can say.

    I personally think the best way would be for them to set him up with teachers,like Malfoy tried in the PS.
     
  3. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Ireedeemable, you say?

    I'm not sure whether you already have setting in mind, but the betrayal that was never used before would be POA AU - Harry beleives Sirius and tries to clear his name, but Ron & Hermione thinks he's criminal and rat Harry out to Dumbledore. Sirius is kissed, but Harry catches Pettigrew and his innocence is confirmed. Harry never speaks again with Ron, Mione & Dumbledore...
     
  4. Sepanto

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    Nice idea ip82, yet i need something post ootp and prehbp.
     
  5. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    You can do house-elf angle.

    Harry inherits Black's factorry filled with enslaved house elves. They like it there, it's like heaven to them, so Harry don't free them. He uses his newfound money to buy new house, clothes, stuff, etc...

    Hermione hates Harry coz of house elves.
    Ron hates him coz of jealosy.
    Add him training in dark arts, and you have plausable motive for them to turn against Harry.

    As for Harry hating them, you can do a number of things - for example, them going out to the press and snitching out on Harry (maybe even about that crucio in the Ministry atrium). Or you can have them spying on Harry for some time, with Harry leting them think they had outsmarted him, or not seeing through their deceit for some time....

    Anyway, classical betrayal's been done too many times to do something truly original, but combine a few old elements and it should turn good enough.
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    That POA one sounds really good. I'd like to see that done.
     
  7. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Wah? It was already here on my side... hrmm, strange things do happen around me.
     
  9. Midknight

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    Nada, I found it in Fanfic Challenge. I moved it right after I posted.

    FanFic Challenge View newest post In need of help.
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  10. Lord Osiris

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    You need to get him training in Black magic or other such more powerful means to maim torture and kill. The idea with POA sounds good it gives you much time to work with, i say get Harry to buy the Burrow before or after the betrayal then in a fit of rage burns it to the ground while all the weasleys...ok except Ginslut stand and watch! Retribution is excellent.
     
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