This could actually work if it was written as a parody fic. But I think the person was truly serious so.....uke:

 

Comas? Sure, I've often thought they should be banned. Commas too, come to think of it. My favourite hphermaphrodite name is Hermanny. Although Ronnilda has a certain ring to it...

EDIT BY NONJON: This is an excellent example of the pointless sort of necro-post we do not want on the forums. malaga has been informed.

 

Forgetting how shit the actual plot is. You have to ask why to everything that happens. Why does Harry become a Harret, why does he go to America? WHY would anyone find a piece of literature, whether it be fan fiction or professional work, entertaining. Its phenomenal how someone would want to see a fic based on this.

Edit: Shit, sorry didnt realise this had been necro-post. My bad!