I just read this story, I didn't like it much, it changes from first to third person for no good reason a few times, the idea had potential but I don't think it was done very well.

This part does not realy fit in, the rest of the story is pretty serious and seeing this made me go "WTH?"



2/5

 

That's a lot interpreted from a soft snort... Kind of pulls the story down into fail, all on its lonesome. If the story isn't amazing otherwise, I'd just laugh and click the X.

Really?

And this is the standard Azkaban!Harry, I can tell by the end of the first chapter. We already have more than enough of these around, and in the library. And it's so melodramatic.

Yeah. Let's see if the next couple chapters get better. Then I'll rate... I can almost imagine some tragedian on stage, shaking with well-faked angst as he bemoans his cruel, cruel fate. Makes me rofl when I see it in fanfiction.

Why does it always have to come back to Hogwarts' houses? And I think this is a dark!Azkaban!Harry. Or at least that's what it's showing signs of. And the writing is still too melodramatic to be considered as DLP standard.

Yeah, no. X I'll give it 2/5 stars for effort and the fact that it's from 2004, but that's more than it deserves.