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Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by lucis, Oct 24, 2009.

  1. Oz

    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Wow. Awesomesauce guys, I'm surprised Fem-Dresden hasn't turned into utter fail - nice recovery.
     
  2. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    Big D: That was amazing! It was a great twist. And it gave the plot some more direction. The power struggle between Harry and Titania... I wonder if freinds interacting with Harry counts as being involved in the Faerie courts?

    Queue:
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    Big D on a Diet

    Virail. You're up. Please confirm within 24 hours.

    EDIT:

    So I reread the new post again... And I think Big D managed to turn something that was making the plot a little over done in to Butcher-like stack on trouble opportunity.

    I've been trying to think of how Harry could defeat Titania. Even with the Summer Lady's mantle she's beyond him/her. So, Dresden needs allies, and the normal ones probably won't be enough... The only two sources of help that come to mind are Mab and the White Council. The Knights might also work...

    As for who is at the door: Susan? Maeve? Martha Liberty? Mac? Peabody? Those are the sort of people who fall into unexpected. Maeve (on behalf of Mab) and Liberty (if WC has found at what happened) are the ones who might logically show up. But I don't think Maeve is much into knocking...
     
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  3. Demons In The Night

    Demons In The Night Chief Warlock

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    http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=329574&posted=1#post329574

    My God this awesomeness!

    5/5
     
  4. Vir

    Vir Centauri Ambassador ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Alright. Confirmed. It's a bit hectic for me at the moment, but I'll hopefully have something up by tomorrow.
     
  5. Vesvius

    Vesvius High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    Whew. I was wondering how I was going to do Fem!Dresden, let along Fem!TimeTraveling!Dresden.
     
  6. Random Shinobi

    Random Shinobi Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    [​IMG]

    EDIT: Huh... That line in the middle was supposed to be green...

    EDIT2: Fixed!

    EDIT3: Anyone wouldn't have a better picture of Dresden? I was sorta surprised that I couldn't find an image where he lies bleeding and beaten on the ground. That should be a common enough occurrence.
     
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  7. Water Mage

    Water Mage Denarii Host

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    Nice banner. Aurora has an ass on her like whoa. I'm stunned at how awesome the story is shaping up so far. I'm hoping it can be kept up.
     
  8. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    Virail: Good to hear!

    Random Shinobi: Thanks for the banner! Someone should put it in the story thread. I just checked, and can no longer edit my post...

    Water Mage: Honestly, I'm surprised to0.

    Virail: Do you mind putting a reminder at the end of your post to put reviews here? It just keeps things simpler.
     
  9. Luda

    Luda Seventh Year

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    Pretty awesome so far. Good work guys, looking foward to what Virail brings to the table.

    5/5
     
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  10. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    OK. When it was just one person I was going to ignore it, but since people don't seem to have noticed: we'd appreciate it if you don't post here (see first AN). I don't mean to be irritating, it's just that this thread is already having authors switching and the posts aren't overly long.

    The correct thread to review/discuss/sign up/ etc is here.

    We appreciate your comments and feedback. We'd just prefer them elsewhere.
     
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  11. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    I'll move those review posts in the D-WBA thread in here in a bit.

    Nice banner Random- I'll add that into that thread as well. What was that model's name? I had some pics of her once.

    Yeah, it's turning out nice. I tried to top Fem! Dresden with timetraveling!Dresden, but Big_D brought some sanity to the storyline. Damn him.
     
  12. Vir

    Vir Centauri Ambassador ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    To be honest, coming after Big_D and Nuhuh is an impossible task. I'll try to have something up today sometime, but I have a huge class schedule today.
     
  13. Random Shinobi

    Random Shinobi Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    I believe she goes by the name of Miss Mosh (either she or the photographer is called that).

    Here's the full Aurora version:
    [​IMG]

    I merely had to change the eye colour.
     
  14. Syrosaka

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    This story wins.
     
  15. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    I have a new guess about who is at the door: Lily.

    She is the Summer Knight after all, and I doubt she is in Titania's good books...
     
  16. Big D on a Diet

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    Lily is the Summer Lady, not the Summer Knight. For the record, I was intending on it being Thomas at the door, since his power to attract any female + an awkward reveal of him being Harry's brother would lead to instant hi-larity.

    But I decided to just let the next person use it as a jumping off point for where ever they wanted to take it.
     
  17. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    Lily is the Summer Lady, not the Summer Knight.

    Not in this fic, or at least not yet.

    Since Harry became Summer Lady, Lily is still Summer Knight.

    Also, Thomas would be pretty funny.
     
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  18. Big D on a Diet

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  19. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    Lily is summer knight? When did this happen?

    *goes to reread*

    Edit:

    Random's Banner is now on the first post. Nice, RS.
     
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  20. lucis

    lucis Seventh Year

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    Assuming that everything in SK occured normally up to that point, she would be.

    That was why Aurora was trying to sacrifice her: to give the mantle of Summer Knight to Winter and break the balance. In SK, when Aurora died she received the mantle of Summer Lady because as the Knight she was already part of Summer, then she made Fix Knight.

    But in this fic, she didn't become Summer Lady and thus is still Knight. Unless someone else is going to change that somehow.


    EDIT:

    Also, thanks for fixing the thread. It looks awesome.
     
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