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Lies, Deceit and Manipulations by SoldieroftheMoon (aka Aekiel) - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Aekiel, Jun 3, 2006.

2.4000000953674/5, 5 votes
  1. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jun 3, 2006 #1
    Title: Lies, Deceit and Manipulations
    Author: Aekiel
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor
    Pairing: Harry/Ginny Harry/Hermione
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Oneshot Harry tests out a new machine.
    Link:http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=16293

    Just a one-shot I thought up when really, really tired tonight. (Its 2am here)


    EDIT: Changed some mistakes. (I was VERY tired when I wrote/posted it so its understandable)
     
    Last edited: Jun 3, 2006
  2. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Jun 3, 2006 #2
    Why would it placate Hermione haters. They make out. Yes, they used loved potion, both of them. Yet, he doesn't do anything to Hermione. Oh, and why is Pansy there?
     
  3. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jun 3, 2006 #3
    Ok, changed some of the mistakes I found. Pansy was going to be the lover at first but I changed my mind after a sudden inspiration (Hermione & the love potion)
    I actually like Hermione (though Ginny could burn in hell for all i care) but I thought the deviousness and cunning would be fitting for her. Where Ginny fails she suceeds but neither would ever have him for real. Meh, I thought it was good. Changed the summary though.
     
  4. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 5, 2009 #4
    This was both short and sort of silly. I didn't see the humor in this, especially when all that happened was Harry trapped Ginny in some room (she used a love potion too), and Hermione walked in. The two kissed, and that's it.

    This doesn't belong in the Library, especially the humor/parody section. I'm not even sure this belongs in the recycle bin. I'll rate this a 2/5.
     
  5. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    Aug 7, 2009 #5
    I'll give it a 3/5 just because the ginger bought it.
     
  6. Trulle

    Trulle Second Year DLP Supporter

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    Aug 8, 2009 #6
    I agree with ^2up -> 2/5