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Lord of Destruction by Demon God of Chaos - Diablo - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Demon God of Chaos, Nov 15, 2005.

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Is this a good story or is it total and utterly bad...

  1. Yes

    94.4%
  2. No

    5.6%
  1. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Title: Lord of Destruction
    Author: Demon God of Chaos
    Rating: M
    Genre: Supernatural
    Crossover: Diablo
    Status: WIP
    Summary: I got this idea one moment after reading Child of Darkness, Lord of the Void. It's my version of what happened. i hope you guys will like this because i expended some time on this one I'm making it a HP Diablo Crossover with minor Diablo influences...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2614697/1/


    This is my story and i hope you like it... it's kinda my reply to Child of Darkness, Lord of the Void.

    Anyhow read it and i hope you like it!

    LONG LIVE THE DARK!


    Edit: N/m I got it - Mid
     
  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    One, this belongs in fanfic discussion ... MOVED!!

    two... well.. ill be honest... most of use read your stuff to find out how bad they can get (if at all).. i like them.. more in a humor way than a serious fic way...
     
  3. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Be nice Vash :twisted:

    Demon, please be sure to read the rules on how a story is supposed to be submitted, we've got a specific format to make it easier when we all post links.

    Link can be found here, http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?t=244

    Correct your post and I'll be happy to move it for you again back into the crossover category.


    And as for Harry/Diablo, I actually think it'd work, the damned Horcrux's are nothing more then a half ass soulstone quest anyway. Hell she's even got Ogden in the books. (firewhiskey)


    Also Demon, be prepared, we are all brutally and harshly honest. Fics that deserve it are lifted up and praised, those that are average get blasted for their faults and praised for their good content in the same post, bad ones just get torn to shreds. There is no sheep effect of FF.net here where everyone thinks a fic is great, even if itz typ liek tis.


    Also when you get a chance, make an introduction thread, it helps to acclimate you to everyone.
     
  4. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yes, we are terribly brutal in grading stories. I haven't read it yet, but I will. Harry x Diablo could work as long as it still has HP in it, unlike these stories that just go AU with someone named Harry and a bunch of OC's.
     
  5. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    Pair him with an Assassin and I'm game. :p

    Seriously, Harry/Natalya would legit kick ass.

    ...Yes, I know I'm obsessed with ninja.

    One piece of advice, try to keep the pairings within reason this time around. Don't do what you did in Dark Lord and have Harry screwing anything on two legs and female (thus not including Herman and Girard). It does get extremely unrealistic and, to be frankly honest, very annoying, after a few chapters when he has like twenty sex partners.
     
  6. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ive been reading it since it was only one chapter... truthfully... its not all THAT great or groundbreaking... but i find it amusing so i keep reading...
     
  7. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Giovanni reviews stories.

    If Giovanni your story sucks, Giovanni will let you know.

    Giovanni's pet gerbil used to do this as well... But then he decided he liked smoking weed and winning Nobel Prizes better, so he doesn't anymore.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    damn you gio...no talking in third person!... weve had this discussion before... and for Circe's sake... stop hmping the gerbil!! ....


    on a more related note... never played much Diablo... ive got Diablo II around here somewhere ... just never bothered to play it...
     
  9. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    muah....

    all i can say is: Read it and enjoy it...

    If you don't like it then don't like it...

    and the Diablo Cross is getting pretty apparent now when i'll post the ninth chapter...

    And as a small note: Dark lord was written in the beginning of my career and in that time period i was still a little bit hormonally imbalanced but now i'm all fine. i'm actually strainign to write soem things as writing comes pretty hard for a guy with my handicap of being socially unaccepted...
     
  10. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    It was ok, Giovanni will give it that... There were a couple moments when Giovanni was like "wtf?!?!?!" but they may have occured because Giovanni read it at 4am because Giovanni often reads fanfiction at early/odd hours because Giovanni does not have normal sleep patterns.

    Giovanni hypothesizes that this is because Giovanni's brain is not smart enuf to make Giovanni have normal sleeping habits.


    Giovanni would like to remind Vash of of the Foamidian Cult that just as his cult hates stupid people, Giovanni is of the Gerbillian cult, and all Gerbillians must speak in what Vash calls "3rd person."
     
  11. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    wait gerbils and squirls are from the same family right?
     
  12. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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  13. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Gah! Don't tell me you're starting this up again.
     
  14. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Giovanni does not understand what you are talking about.

    Giovanni would however like to reccommend to Demon God of Chaos a few things that will drastically improve his writing.

    #1. Avoid wordiness. Giovanni (and other fanfiction readers) do not like wasted words. Wasted words are evil, and must be destroyed.

    #2. Always Edit for Clarity. Giovanni believes this to be self-explanitory. Also have your beta/beta's read over it. Read the chapter out loud as well... If it seems awkward out loud, then it is awkward for a reader.

    #3. Join the Gerbillian Cult. Giovanni knows that you are puzzled by this, however, it is a proven fact that members of the Gerbillian cult write better novel length fanfiction, theortical physics equations, better drunken poetry than any other cults.
     
  15. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Hehe i love all this little by-play, must say im more then content to sit back and observe! but alas reply's must be posted! love the story it amuses me. Oh yeh go the Harry x Diablo MWAHAHA... *cough* *splutter*

    *note to self work on evil laugh!
     
  17. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    I tried to do evil laughter but5 it somehow sounded geeky when i did it... kinda like a third grader..

    everyone just stared at me weirdly and i said: "What the hell are you looking at!?"
     
  18. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    dude I got a weird crossover idea harry/scarface
     
  19. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    good idea...

    Just let me check if its something and i might do one...
     
  20. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    That'd just be freaking weird I'd imagine.

    I do like some of the Harry/Mafia fics thou, but Tony Montana and HP.. I dunno why but it just seems so far off of readable, lol
     
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