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Lord of Destruction by Demon God of Chaos - Diablo - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Demon God of Chaos, Nov 15, 2005.

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Is this a good story or is it total and utterly bad...

  1. Yes

    94.4%
  2. No

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  1. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    it wasn't MY idea to write... i kinda did it as repayment for some girl....

    she gave me much of my lost chapters that got deleted and i did that to repay her...

    damn i felt sick for a few days after writing that...

    I stick with Het fics from that time on...

    although she rewarded me a little bit nby inspiring me to write soemthign new for a change...
     
  2. Midknight

    Midknight Middy is SPAI! DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    We appreciate it that you read it without utterly destroying it beforehand, but in your haste you forgot that we would like the stuff that makes us collectivly vomit, (no offense Demon, lol), to be kept in Gio's S&P weird little world =)
     
  3. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    ehm i think that the main topic is still my story called Lord of Destruction...

    i don't know how the subject got onto teh fact that i wrote that scene to please a girl for giving me a new chapter but just so you know: i despise slash and i absolutely CAN'T write it...

    oh yeah... i updated a new chapter for Lord of Destruction.

    It's called Bella and the Soul Stone :lol:
     
  4. True Story

    True Story Third Year

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    The poll choices make no sense in relation to the question.
     
  5. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    the name i often title myself is Demon god of CHAOS...

    thus i have Chaos spread all around me and are genreally a messed up kid. i work in erratic patterns and thus am often able to ask extremely weird questions...

    and make extremely weird answers.

    and i have soemoen in my class who thought Did was written as Didt

    my engliush teacher was amazed and said that she hadn't seen something like that ever in her entire career and that's counting about twenty years if my guess is correct...
     
  6. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Uhm.. I'm with them, I understood what you were asking but the question doesn't make sense in itself.

    Just read through this, congrats your fic has made it to my Top 5 Bookmarked WiP's. (I think this is inpart due to my brief black out period known as 6th and 7th grade where I played Diablo 1 like a fiend )
     
  7. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Your top 5 of bookmarked WIP's? you actually placed in your favourites?

    I'm so happy!
     
  8. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    a new chapter has been added

    i hope you';ll like it
     
  9. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    I did, nice Brother v. Brother, but it was incredibly short :evil:
     
  10. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Hey! I'll try to get another out before December 31th

    Would that satisfy your lust for more?

    And try to leave a review...

    I'd appreciate more reviews on my stories... it makes me stop killing myself... i soemtimes think nobody appreciates my work... Lord of Dewstruction will be finished before i go and work on my supreme fan fic!

    DARK LORD!... the new version of it!

    Will feature Evil! Harry... Dumbledore bashing.... Myself... ( only a passing reference)... some people i know and hate... Hermione and Ginny getting Impaled on sticks.... ginny fucking a dog....

    Imperioed Miuggles killing each otehr....
    Dark Lord! Harry
     
  11. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    I'm not sure why but I never really liked reviewing, only if I didn't talk to the author somewhere else to congrad. them [ dlp, aim ext. ]

    I think its cause I like seeing re-actions.. =/

    I will be checking your story, have it bookmarked, and post here. :)

    Ginny & Hermione impaled? Sounds great, can they be alive to know their fate?
     
  12. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Ever heard of a story where they were impaled while they were dead?

    It's more fun to watch tehm BLEED! and SCREAM!
     
  13. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Well.. no, but yah - I wanna see them suffer, not just for a split second ^_^

    Great fuckin chapter dude, I'm even gonna review. :cheers:
     
  14. parselmaster

    parselmaster Sixth Year DLP Supporter

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    I honesty like or dislike Most charecters by how they are most recently written, or if someone protrays Hermione as a bitch, than she is a bitch in my mind, but separate in my mind than if she is written nice. I never liked Ginny though. Your impaling her would be appreciated and enjoyed, Can I sell tickets? I'll give 50% of the money to you.
     
  15. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Ah! Gawd! Short, short, short chapters. That seemed like less then 500 words!

    Still good, except for the number in the beginning paragraph. :twisted:
     
  16. Mrriddler

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    oh I used to play d2 hardcore...and got heavy into the market stuff, speculate on goodies, sell short before the dupes came out... etc. My friend used to sell the stuff he botted ebay.

    You're still psychotic, but I like what you did with bringing Fenrir in, kind of. More stories need to incorporate the big bad wolf hehe.

    Assuming I got the story right, I'm actually interested in seeing the revised dark lord, which really was the one story I liked right up to until before it got pulled I think. The succubus Rowena was pretty orginal and hawt. :twisted:
     
  17. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Good stuff. Post your notes about your story in here in the future. :D
     
  18. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    alright... a new chapter has been posted on the 6th...

    trhis is merely a small reminder....

    I'll post more when teh writing mood hits me...
     
  19. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Groovy!! :D :D :D


    P.S.

    Don't Worry about the haters. The worst that can happen is that they'll stop reading your fic (like most of the world who don't bother reading fanfics.) SO CHEERS!!! :cheers: :D :D :D
     
  20. Demon God of Chaos

    Demon God of Chaos Seventh Year

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    Small extra info: I have finished a new chapter but will post it once i finish teh next chapter of Dark Lord 2.0

    You got to wait some time for it guys... but doin't be too disappointed because it's going to be a blast!
     
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