Certainly an interesting story as they go. I'll continue reading it. Unique in that he's sort of not very likable.

 

Updated on PatronusCharm: http://patronuscharm.net/s/78/6/

I'll post it on FFnet later.

EDIT: Here's the FFnet link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4080247/6/Lost_Time

Things are a-changing.

 

Just had to reread the whole story....but it was worth it. The characterization of Neville and Harry is really well done. The last two scenes were definitively suprising, I didn't think that Harry would go for it so fast.
All in all, good work. The overall atmosphere of the story is appealing and together with the politics it makes for a thrilling read.

 

Very nice, Amer. I was really impressed with the way you wrote the Harry x Hannah scene when he headed home for his 'early lunch'. Looking forward to more, man. 5/5

 

THIS is why you deserve to be published. Good god, why are you wasting time writing Harry Potter?! You could probably make a chapter about an armadillo crossing the road interesting... unlike that prick who wrote The Grapes of Wrath.

 

Shh! Amer, he doesn't mean it - keep writing Lost Time!!

One of my new favorite fics, which I gave the unique descriptor "original".

Very hard to come across in HP fanfic.

5/5.

 

This is no doubt my favorite fic. The way Harry lies,cheats, etc does what he has to do to go along, even though he hates himself for it. He despises his future self yet is entangled in the very thing he despises. He can't help but cheat on Hannah and now I'm sure murder people to steal their magic. This is everything I've always wanted out of an hp fic and it's written every bit as spectacularly as the plot premise itself. 5/5