You had Giovanna suck of Sevvy?

ICK!!!!

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Thats fuckin sickening.

 

woo! nice story. I can only hope for sadistic bitch!Aludra

 

She'll be a force all in her self if my plans turn out right... she wont play much of a part in this story... but once the second half of the story roles around... which ive currently entited that blasted sequel i never planned on... shell have a muh larger part and hopefully will be a wonderful character...

 

If you kill Cho, I'ma do to you what Harry did to Snape. Keep that in mind.

Now then, I don't understand why he didn't send Cho to spy on the Ministry and the Order instead of Daphne. She already has connections with those people and was involved with the original investigation. Though her Occlumency might not be strong enough to fool them. Is it because of the public comment in the Prophet than she and Harry were seeing one another?

 

Harry sent daphne for several reasons... the two most important being he didn't trust Cho's occlumency abilities or her acting abilitiy... he felt it was best to send Daphne, adn yeah... the article would have swayed people aganst cho...

 

How would he do that? Cho doesn't have a tail.

 

no...ut she wont exempt from his rage for much longer... shes gonna fail at somthing important and harry wont be able to hold back any longer and pow! *insert old adam west batman series sound effect*

 

sooo.. im stuck in one detail... vampires... who do i classify them... Should I use the VtM clan system? oooorr... do i go plain undead guys that have just seperated off into covens (like family houses such as the blacks and the potters and what not) ... ive got several ideas and im stuck... any preferences since i AM continuing this for you guys rather than the sex addicted ifiots of FF.NET

 

What is VtM first of all?

Second....I think the coven system would be quite interesting.

 

ahh... forgot the tabletop RPG illeterate .. VtM is Vampire The Masquerade... much like D&D (dungeons and dragons) something on the order of 13 different clans of Kindred (vamps) with a whole slew of abilites...some are pretty nifty... i, myself, prefer toreador and lasombra clans...

Sanguinus Curae Lovely VtM info.. I love their Belladonna Elder Creation System...

 

Dude, i just read the firsdt 2 chapters of your sotry, and all i have to say is that its fucked up, kind of freaked me out. You have a very weird mind set.

 

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... youve just noticed this? ..we've all got our fucked up mindsets... but it mellows out a bit later on...

 

Ok here's what I'm doing in the story I am currently working on, I'm going to have many different covens with the leader of each sitting on a council and they elect a leader amongst themselves every 40 years or so.

 

Ive got a system i think...

Covens are Blood families (vamp 1 turns mortal 1 - mortal 1 becomes vamp 2 - vamp 2 is vamp 1's blood son/daughter)

covens act as seperate entities (IE no single government.. ) sme ally with others, while others remain netural and some war with one another...

New covens are created by one vampire breaking off from their sire though it happens very rarely as most are content to exist in the family type situation even if they have to obey a "parent"


... its a good idea really.. simply cant explain it very well

 

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Not very god ill admit... buut yeah... there it is... *shrugs* ill try to improve the next chapter...

 

I believe I understand your coven system. I have a different reason for Vampires and Wherewolves not getting along.....I htink it will be....Most interesting. :wink:

 

This is pretty good (of what I've read so far.) As of right now, I can't concentrate on reading the whole story but I've read up to chapter 5 or so. But I'm trying to concentrate. Laziness is a curse. Especially when I'm supposed to be doing some report on something due Tuesday, I think. Ah well.

 

Thank Vampire seemed quite dissrespectfull to me, I would have been inclined to kill her.

By the way is VtM a MMORPG? Or a board game?

 

There were at least 30 vampires in the building... while harry might be powerful, he aint gonna be able to fight 30 vampires alone.. while he might have been lusting to tear her throat out, he couldnt..

VtM is ... a table top role playing game.. dice and papers and story telling... suppose you could consider it a board game as they do have minuratures I THINK.. not sure on that..