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Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, Sep 6, 2005.

  1. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    thats just evil
     
  2. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    *sigh* I cant believe im actually telling you this, but Hermy will be the first one to draw lines to harry, but will probably be the second of the investigators to kick it. The first one the case sets up the earlier mentioned machinations for cho.

    ... Can you go off the deep end FROM the deep end? Ive the ability to be just as sick as you do, but I do it in a more realistic way. Well, well see about that. Lets just hope it doesnt get too much worse than it already is


    An idea im not going to use more than likely for a rondom death....

    A female dentist in her office after hours finds herself trapped by harry. Hed eventually strap her to her chair and turn on the laughing gas, sampling it himself, before keeping it as he operates orally on the poor dentist. Bonus points if you can find the movie/movies that inspire this scene! ^_^
     
  3. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Hey Vash.

    Care to try and match me?

    Because you know what will happen if I REALLY go for sickening :)


    I may just create a fic that makes people gouge out their eyes upon completing it.


    Could you send Harry after Ginny pleeeeeease? I wanna see the stalker bitch die.

    Or maybe McGonagall (That was the gerbil talking NOT me)
     
  4. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    The female dentist has to be Hermione's mum if you do it.
     
  5. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    O_- ... noo.. thats okay.. im actually trying to keep this seriosu and i dont want to ruin the beautiful start i have so far and i doubt id come up with anything else...

    as far as the dentist serap.. it more than like would be hermy's mum just for me to cause hermy pain for the fun of it.. though i seriously doubt id do it...
     
  6. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    ok :)

    Just keep the torture coming :)
     
  7. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Hermione should figure out its Harry while she's alone with him, lol. He notices that she knows and goes for the kill! :p

    Much torture for Hermy.
     
  8. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    If i keep my original plans... harry probably wont even know until her catches her...
     
  9. Kaotac

    Kaotac Second Year

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    Should have Tonks be one of his next targets. She's a Metamorph, and he puts a leather kinda bondage mask on her, and he doesn't notice that her appearance had changed until he reads the paper the next day, and sees that he accidently offed Tonks.
     
  10. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    There are no accidents in my story... If harry targets tonks he did so on purpose... But ive got plans for tonks later on so no tonkie death... yet...

    and now.. a question... have you ever had a character hijack your mind while you were already satisfied with your plot and writing and start adding plot bits linking to nonexistant stories such as unintentional sequal starts and the like?

    well i was doubleteamed by bellatrix and harry... which sounds far kinkier than i intend >_< ... and had Harry's machinations for cho turned into an accident and a major past event revealed that i hadnt intended to add and an ... effect .... of the event as well...
     
  11. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    lol.

    I hate it when that happens.
     
  12. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    * Title: Lust Of A Dark Soul
    * Genre: Horror/Mystery
    * Pairings: None
    * Rating: M/Borderline NC-17
    * Summary: Everyone has a darkness hidden in them. Some are satible. Some aren't. Come, I'll tell you the story of my darkness...

    * Link:
    First Hunt: The beginning:
    FF.net --- DLP.net
    Second Hunt: Journey Thru A Dark And Twisted Wonderland:
    ff.net ---DLP.Net
    Third Hunt: Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torments of man:
    FF.Net --- DLP.Net

    ****

    My Newest Perversions... I suggest extreme caution when read as many bad ideas have been added and poorly plotted points.. as well as something no male should ever experience... and kitchenware!
     
  13. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Now thats some funny shit. Cuting his balls off and putting them in his mouth. Poor cunt. He would have been alive at the time. You go Vash! Keep it up! Lovin' it!
     
  14. Kaotac

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    *crosses his legs with a grimace* Evil person..
     
  15. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    WHOA!


    I REALLY want to see Hermione die. PLEASE! If I were Harry she would be the first one I would kill. She knows Harry, she's VERY clever, plus she's nosy and a busy-body. NOT killing her is stupid of Harry in my opinion.
     
  16. SlytherinDamian

    SlytherinDamian Raptured to Hell

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    Only movie that comes to mind is Little Shop of Horrors...

    I was very surprised by this fic. I had been passing on it because it was shipless, and that might continue to bug me (especially after the great Harry/Bella interaction), but this is probably the best writing I have seen in fanfiction, period. I felt chills while reading his thoughts as he committed his crimes. Perfectly wicked...
     
  17. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    ^_^ yesh!... little shop of horrors it was!

    but fear not.. there will be much more interaction between bella and harry to claim it as a ship but make no mistake, harry would kill her in an instant. There is no love there. Harry will slowly grow attached to Bella, but only to a certain extent. Bur love or hate, she and her death eater chums are still going to be his scapegoat until someone IDs him, whereupon he'll step out of the shadows and claim leadership and responsiblity of his faction, which is as of now, still nameless as I dont want to reuse death eaters once Harry is offically known to be the newest dark lord

    though it wont come to light ever, in my mind, when harry was carving him up, there were preservation charms on him. He was alive until harry removed them. Which was just after his heart was pulled from his chest

    Shell get hers soon enough, though im going to give her inspiration to dig harder soon. She Will eventually ID harry but will never get a chance to share this knowledge

    ^_^ Aren't I?
     
  18. LT2000

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    Whoa, so this one is really going to go the distance, then. I was expecting about eight or so chapters. Glad to see it's going to have some length behind it. I'm looking forward to seeing what he does to Cho. I love the girl to death, but there's no way that this Harry would ever spare her.
     
  19. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Hehe .. nope.. not gonna spare her. He'll eventually get her. but ive got something especially devious in mind for her.
     
  20. SlytherinDamian

    SlytherinDamian Raptured to Hell

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    Well, I'm satisfied. Will any DE's join his faction, or is he out for young blood? If that's the case, any Slytherin's we know from his school days?