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Abandoned Lust of a Dark Soul by Vash The Unholy - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, Sep 6, 2005.

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  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sep 12, 2005 #41
    Itll be a mix and match deal. You will see a couple of his school chums turn up. Some surprising, some not. Several death eaters will turn up next chapter. And harry begins his plans for Cho.
     
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Pansy :p Mwuahahahah!
     
  3. SlytherinDamian

    SlytherinDamian Raptured to Hell

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    Sep 12, 2005 #43
    I'm thinking of Pansy in particular, indeed. She's one of my fav characters... should I be frieghtened or optimistic, vash?
     
  4. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Sep 12, 2005 #44
    PANSY! PANSY!

    HOO, HOO!
     
  5. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Pansy might show im.. im not entirely sure yet... i do have one school buddy showing up very soon... and several of the elder death eaters as well...
     
  6. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sep 13, 2005 #46
    * Title: Lust Of A Dark Soul
    * Genre: Horror/Mystery
    * Pairings: None
    * Rating: M/Borderline NC-17
    * Summary: Everyone has a darkness hidden in them. Some are satible. Some aren't. Come, I'll tell you the story of my darkness...

    * Link:
    First Hunt: The beginning:
    FF.net --- DLP.net
    Second Hunt: Journey Thru A Dark And Twisted Wonderland:
    ff.net ---DLP.Net
    Third Hunt: Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torments of man:
    FF.Net --- DLP.Net
    Fourth Hunt: To Go Beyond Is As Wrong As To Fall Short
    FF.Net --- DLP.net

    Death Eaters, Marks, and plans being put into motion. I just dont feel this is up to the quality of the rest of the story. Enjoy thoguh
     
  7. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    are you going to kill greengrass? i love it.... :twisted: cant wait for the next update :twisted:
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    That was awesome. I loved how he treated Ginny. I reckon he should keep Greengrass as his real woman. Doesnt mean he has to be all mushy does it? No. He has to have someone around that he atleast feels something for other than hate and disgust.

    Update soon!
     
  9. Anonymous

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    Sep 14, 2005 #49
    GREAT!
     
  10. Old Nuit

    Old Nuit High Inquisitor

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    This story is just unique, I would say more *shrugs* but I really don't know what.
     
  11. Akalon

    Akalon Second Year

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    Sep 18, 2005 #51
    Oh hell yeah, this is one dark and sick & twisted Harry. I LOVE IT!!!

    Gotta admit though you need to check some of your spelling a bit in the early chapters. Other then that, it's great.
     
  12. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Why thank you akalon... i know i gotta recheck the spelling... im correcting it as i go when i hit a road block...

    meh... my plans for cho seem to be changing... i dont think she is going to die but she will be a part of harry's plans..

    and that also means ive got several scenes i cant use... with some others from earlier drafts that i planned on using but didnt... im wondering... should i post the unused scenes as a bonus to the DLP crew or just leave them forever forgotten
     
  13. LT2000

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    He should turn Cho evil and keep her, says I. And update soon, dammit. :p
     
  14. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    that was my thought... and it should be up tomorrow latest if my plans to suddenly change mid drift...
     
  15. LT2000

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    Goody. If things keep up, Dark!Cho is going to become a new craze. I love writing her in my fic.
     
  16. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    that could be a bad thing though... it might attaract those .. *shudders* h/g-shippers jumping bandwagons...
     
  17. LT2000

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    We'll run them out of Dodge, then. Besides, H/G shippers don't like Dark!Harry as a general rule.
     
  18. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    Sep 19, 2005 #58
    now who says everyone of them follows the rules?
     
  19. LT2000

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    I say so, bah gawd. But we'll just protect against them by killing Ginny violently in all of our Dark!Cho fics. That will keep them bloody filthy Orange Crush shippers away.
     
  20. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sep 20, 2005 #60
    * Title: Lust Of A Dark Soul
    * Genre: Horror/Mystery
    * Pairings: None
    * Rating: M/Borderline NC-17
    * Summary: Everyone has a darkness hidden in them. Some are satible. Some aren't. Come, I'll tell you the story of my darkness...

    * Link:
    First Hunt: The beginning:
    FF.net --- DLP.net
    Second Hunt: Journey Thru A Dark And Twisted Wonderland:
    ff.net ---DLP.Net
    Third Hunt: Hope is the worst of evils, for it prolongs the torments of man:
    FF.Net --- DLP.Net
    Fourth Hunt: To Go Beyond Is As Wrong As To Fall Short
    FF.Net --- DLP.net
    Fifth Hunt: When lenity and cruelty play for a kingdom the gentler gamester is the soonest winner.
    FF.Net -- DLP.net

    New chapter... Little bit moving forward... chang of my plkans with cho show through... not much happens in this chapter ... enjoy!
     
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