Sorry... I just don't like Cho. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate her either... I'm just kinda lukewarm about a Harry/Cho pairing, I don't think it would work out. Both are far to hot tempered/bi-polar.

 

eh... stick around.. you get to see a female OC inspired by your name bang harry eventually.. and my nifty new werewolf lex will some time... maybe next chapter... not sure..

 

I really like both those chicks, will the nurse or w/e join Harry? She seems to lack much empathy, I think she'd be perfect assuming she has vaguely similar views to the bunk Harry is rallying behind. If not, 'banging' is still good I suppose. Did she not give a crap about the Weasleys cuz they're blood traitors?

Gooo Lex! I never usually like female erewolves, but she seems like a really fucked up, less annoying Luna, which is pretty cool.

 

I dont mind OCs as long as they well written.. Lex fits her role rather well i think... and Giovana is one of my favorite characters... along with Nora and Jorgis Kass from my other story...

As for Giovanna not giving a fluff about the weasleys ... its cause shes a very vain and narcassistic person... She feels only the most powerful and sucessful people can understand her or are worthy of her concern... She would join Harry whether or not she agreed with their views if she thought it would forther her career or make her stand out more...

Lex being a less annoying luna.... i hadnt thought about that... luna is more of a peaceful person... and lex is no where as dellusional... shes just ... off in the head...

Both of them are slightly fun to write...Giovanna is based alot on my personality ... Ive got a slightly narcassistic streak at times.. shes the most fun for me to write acutally...

 

I have yet to come across a truly well written OC who was a major character.

I have seen fics come close... But never have I seen one completely succeed.

 

I'm partial to the one in Daughter of Darkness, personally.

As well as my own, of course.

 

thats favoritism sera! .. thats bad! ... bad serapheth no cho!!

yeah.. i liked DoD as well... i need to catch up on it....

 

Out of all the OC's I have seen Sera's wins...

 

no question about that

 

Never Read it. I plan to though.

 

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The chapter sucks I think but its finished... not alot accomplished plot wise.. just a fun little thing I wrote... The plot moves forward next chapter which I have the Azkaban and Malfoy Scenes planned to take place in .... and another little scene for that Im not sure if im going to use at all... its too early ffor it i think...

 

Brilliant!! I would have liked to see him torture VErnon and PEtunia some more as they are ones who TRULY fucked up his childhood.

 

pleasure and pain are the most addictive things to get lost in. but yes this was a good chapter. harry should deal with his uncle and aunt himself. he keep them as prisoners or something and not kill them quickly.

 

Lovely idea now that i look back at it but unfortunately they arent going to be prisoners... theyre already dead...

 

hey vash..i've been wondering. what does you banner say.the letters appear a bit unclear on my screen.

 

it was meant to be blury but i think i went a bit overboard with it... its from a song called Ice Blue Eyes from Rurouni Kenshin... It says:

Cold that can burn a person
Throwing away pride
Stopping time with hatred

 

ahh. thanks cause i was tring to figure out what it said for a while besides that was a good show.

 

The first line of your signature pic looks like 'Cold that can but a person' to me, Vash.

This chapter wasn't the best -- the first half was sort of boring, and Giovanna did not seem like one of the most important women of her nation to me -- why would someone like that be working as a mediwitch, anyway?

The Dersley torture scene could have been better, too -- maybe if it actually described how they were tortured. I mean, I've read enough about ass-rape to content me for a few chapters -- hell, I'll probably be content for several millennia. I wouldn't mind hearing about a good torture session, though. =p

 

yeah... i know... <_< i changed the sig and fucked up and didnt notice it >_< ... effin hell...

second.. Giovanna.. she NOT the most important person of her nation... and thats what narcissism is all about.. she exagerates all of her accomplishments ot garner praise and thinks ONLY the most important and most sucessful of people can even HOPE of understanding her...

As for torture.. there will be... and less sex for a while... but i never intended to SHOW what happened to the dursleys ... daphne is screwed up on a mental level even if she seems sane ... so im letting you decided exactly how screwed up and imagine it...

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and on a non-burt note ... w00t!

My favorite review for the story from ff.net! everything copied word for word... even the anon name s/he used...