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Mahou mo Ken by Enterprise1701-d - PG13

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Manatheron, Jan 3, 2008.

2.5/5, 10 votes
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  1. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Jan 8, 2008 #21
    This fic fails. Badly. Really, really, really REALLY badly.

    Logically inconsistent, BS foreign influences, authors notes in the middle of chapters, and cliche as all hell.

    Kill it with fire, or at least a machete.
     
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