Title: Making Life Interesting
Author: XDracoMalfoysGirlX
Rating: M
Genre: Erotic/Drama(?)
DLP Category:Restricted Section
Pairing: Harry/Lavender, Harry/Pansy, Harry/Many (maybe)
Status: WIP (although it's marked as "completed" on FFN, it's still being updated)
Summary: Harry never expected such a side to him existed as the one that Lavender brings out in him. some HPXPP
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6651994/1/Making_Life_Interesting

I found this fic some time ago and although there seems to be no real plot so far, the smut is definitely good.

 

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Do. Not. Want.

 

Oh, come on! True, the name of the author is suspiciously dubious, but damnit! you have to admit the smut is pretty good.

Especially that part where Lavender is tied up to the ceiling or something.

 

I read this story a while ago. You know what I didn't think? "Hey I should post that in for review."

I just re-read the story. You know what I thought? "Hey I was right last time"

 

IF you're looking for a Harry Potter smut fic, I would accept it being classified as good. Overall though, the smut is fairly average, HP authors in general have no idea on how to write stuff like that which makes the few good ones stand out. However, neither of those things makes up for the fact that it lacks on essential thing, a story.

 

I read it.

It didn't get me up.

"Sure", you say. "No reason a bit of smut should make you hard."

Pause then, to remember, that I'm 16. A strong wind will...

fail/5

For shame.

 

Ah. I remember reading this. It honestly bored me mostly. Except for that scene with Millicent at the end. That's like adding dog shit to a nurgling and horror pile. Unnecessary.

 

Lawl, this. The author seems to have forgotten that Millicent is fuck ugly, to begin with.

FuckNo/5

 

You know a smutfic is good when you get turned on just by reading it. And this is not good. At all. No plot, no sparks, nothing. 1/5

 

Read this a while back. It's better than some of the smut out there, but by no means is it great. You want smut?

Fine.

 

At a glance, that community seems pretty fucking bad.

 

Smut without quality control. I think they don't accept slash, but anything (ANYTHING) else goes.

 

Being 23, and therefore a perpetual hard-on, my method of reviewing smutfics is this:

I work in a freezer. If the story can get my hard at work then it gets a good review. This story failed to do so. Fail/5, thanks for trying