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Malignant Objects by Charlie -dashdot- Blue - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by razz, Mar 19, 2006.

  1. Korisovra

    Korisovra Headmaster

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    I saw the thread and tried to read it without checking the reviews. I made it through the first few chapters before Alt+F4'ing the fuck out of it. I'll give it a 3.5/5 up to that point and a finger for the rest of it.
     
  2. Orm Embar

    Orm Embar Auror

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    It's written well, I'll give it that. The virtues stop there. The author made Harry into a bisexual sex god, and created an stuish OC, an underground leader known only to the readers as "The Lady". It's twisted to the point of not really resembling an HP fanfic and it contains slash. Frankly, I'm surprised it's up here.

    3/5 for good writing but a plot made almost entirely of failure and AIDS.
     
  3. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    I still like this story, "malebonding" aside. Not very Harry Potter... more like Revelations on too much LSD, but hey, it's good shit.

    4/5
     
  4. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Eh, I'm sure I've read this latest chapter before. Is it toast?

    Either way, this fic is sliding into fail due to extreme lack of anything happening other than a lot of posturing.
     
  5. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    I quit reading after Dumbledore had control of him. Fucking pussy Harry after this. Not even worth the time. I give it a 2. It's below average.
     
  6. yak

    yak Moderator DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    It was pretty obvious that that was only going to be a temporary state of affairs, and it was. It was done for character growth reasons. Struggling against and overcoming adversity.