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Oneshot Master of Death by NightFox - K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Eagle, Aug 2, 2015.

  1. Eagle

    Eagle Temporarily Banhammered

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    Title: Master of Death
    Author: NightFox
    Rating: K+
    DLP Category: Dark Arts
    Pairing: None
    Status: Oneshot
    Summary: A One-Shot, created after considering how the world might view the Hallows if the secret was ever revealed, and an embellishment on the title of the "Master of Death" - given to the individual who holds all three Hallows.
    Link: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=9971

    Awesome one shot. I love this Harry. He is simply awesome. Makes me hate Ron all the more. 5/5.
     
    Last edited: Aug 2, 2015
  2. Download

    Download High Inquisitor ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Doesn't go anywhere, Ron bashing for no particular reason (and unlike most people on DLP I can tolerate it when it's done well), treating Malfoy like he's actually a threat...

    There's more wrong with this but I can't be bothered dissecting it anymore. 1/5
     
  3. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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    Someone needs to count up how many fics are named "Master of Death" and then correlate that number to how many of them are actually good.
     
  4. Scott

    Scott Professor DLP Supporter

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    You can tolerate Ron bashing when it's well done? I wouldn't even call it Ron bashing. He had like one line that mentioned him and I didn't get any bashing from it. I'm not even going to get into Malfoy.

    I give it a 4/5. I enjoyed it. I wish the premise could be expanded on.
     
    Last edited: Aug 3, 2015
  5. Rayndeon

    Rayndeon Professor

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    Seems like an interesting premise. Wish it was a longer one-shot - with more scenes afterward. 4/5.
     
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