I remember reading this not too long ago, I'd give it a 4/5 as well. Fleur wasn't done unrealistically, but I always envisioned her more stuck-up. Still, it has decent grammar, and a good pairing, just lacking the extra zing to make it 5/5.

 

Jedi Mind Trick!Fleur was amusing. I thought it was a decent fic.

The way the story ended, I thought it was a set up for a sequel. It's a good pairing with decent grammar, but I the ending was abrupt-- almost like it was too forced.

3.4 stars because I don't think I could justify rounding it up to 4 stars.

 

A woman is more than a pretty face? Pfft, know your place, bitch, and go and make me a sandwhich.

That said, I found this story to be...eh. 3/5

 

Read it as it came out. The first two chapters were pretty interesting, and then it sort of fizzled out in the third and fourth. That makes me wonder if the author had any idea what to do next or if it was planned. It was a reasonably enjoyable quick read.

3/5

 

This story was well-written and contained one of the rarer pairings, but it just didn't engage me. It was a little long to be a oneshot, and it certainly wasn't long enough to be a fully fledged story, and just wasn't really interesting to me. I'm going to have to go with a 3/5.

 

I’d give it a 2/5, if not for the fact that Harry is competent when travelling by floo. That’s something I don’t encounter often enough. 3/5 for that, even though it is in dire need of some proof-reading, less bureaucracy and more rocking bureaus.

 

It's alright. I manages to avoid being cliche' (at least overly so) but it seems like more of a prelude to a story rather than a story in an of it's self.

Average
3/5

 

It held my interest for a time. Foiling a plot that is started by your own side right under your nose is kind of rare and the turn out is surprising.

For the quality and thought out, I'd give three stars.

But it did capture my interest for a time so I'll give 7/10