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Naruto Fanfiction List

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Tinder, Feb 11, 2006.

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  1. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Dammit! That's the angle I was shooting for in 'Sacrifice'...

    Ahh well, We'll just have to share the Idea i guess.
     
  2. Thorn

    Thorn Professor

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    Are there any good Naruto/Bleach cross overs besides Shrouded in Orange and Crimson Edge that are at least decent? I'm not usually one for cross overs but this is one that seems to really have potential.

    For that matter, and however oot it may be. Any one know any good Bleach fics? TFF is severely lacking in almost everything buy Naruto.
     
  3. Paravon

    Paravon Seventh Year

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    Title: Kyuubi Chronicles, First Scroll
    Author: Griever
    Rating: R
    Pairing: N/A
    Summary: Uzumaki Naruto. Kyuubi no Kitsune. A story of lives lost, promises kept, and a twisted, tangled sense of honor.

    FicWad: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=47386

    The first chapter is the best, and while the last few chapters have a drop in the sense of power they have, this is still among the best stories I have read. Period

    Epic. Pure Epic.
     
  4. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    What the fuck? That story confused me to no end.
     
  5. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    It was one of the entry's for the challenge Kracken's Ghost hosted. Good series of stories altogether, I just wish they'd update faster :p
     
  6. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Title: Within the Pale White Light
    Author: Gloria Stone
    Rating: K+
    Pairing: N/A
    Summary: Shikamaru, Hinata, Lee and Naruto find themselves in a strange world with even stranger enemies. Crossover with Halo

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3008309/1/

    The summary makes it sound bad, but its actually quite decent. They pop up on Reach somewhere between Halo 1 & 2 (doesnt explain how).
    The Naruto characters dont go round owning everyone with their mad skills, its more Halo universe, with some Naruto characters being pulled along, Spartans are still hardcore etc.

    Writing isn't the best but its easy to read. Should give it a shot just to see if you guys like it.. really! its not that bad!
     
  7. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Eh... it doesnt really hold my attention. It does seem to be going somewhere and it has a good amount of detail. It has no spelling or grammar errors I can see. It just doesnt feel like a story. It feels more like a script. It's probably just me though.
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    No? [​IMG]

    'Kyuubi Chronicles, First Scroll' is okay... kinda... maybe? I liked the first chapter, especially Itachi's thought process before being mashed and Kyuubi's rule of the thumb. That might of been one of the other contest stories, though. Where Kyuubi goes 'Swipe Human = Bloody Smear', etc, etc.

    The rest was... blargh. I liked some of the other stories better in the contest.
     
  9. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    @Mercenary: The Halo game dialogue is very much a script, and feels very scripty.

    I think the author IS focusing more on the Halo side of things as a whole anyhow, considering the setting as well as the way the story is presented- the severe lack of jutsu use only complements that idea.

    So it's logical to assume that the author's using more of Halo as inspiration than Naruto, and thus much more 'immersed' in that fandom's atmosphere. Therefore, the dialogue is more scripty than what it would be if it was a strictly Naruto fanfic, where the dialogue tells the story, and not the cutscenes.
     
  10. Mercenary

    Mercenary Snake Eater

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    Category: Naruto
    Title: Sanghieli and ninja acquaintances
    Genre: Drama/Action/Adventure
    Rating: Fiction Rated: M
    Summary: Halo x Naruto. The elites have returned, but now must realize the danger of the strife against the demon vessel. It will take their utmost care to avoid bringing danger upon themselves. Naruto also has his own problems he must defeat. Rated M for mature.

    URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2725944/1/

    This seems to be better. I dont think the Elites are too overpowered here. It seems to have a decent storyline. Talking about anything else will probably give the story away so go ahead. Click the link. No aparrant pairings other than the "canon!Hinata watching Naruto"
     
  11. Vendo

    Vendo Fourth Year

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    Category: Naruto
    Title: Overlord
    Rating: Fiction Rated: M
    Summary: A little experiment... A Naruto, Disgaea crossover where Laharl claims Naruto as his successor. Check it out, leave a review.

    URL:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3445791/1/

    A good story despite that i have never played Disgaea so that kinda makes it a little more confusing. Aside from that i think it's a great story.
     
  12. Lutris

    Lutris Jarl Dovahkiin DLP Supporter

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    ...I liked the first one better. Dunno if that's the case for you though.
     
  13. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    I read about halfway through the first chapter of the Disgaea one, because anything with Laharl should be epic. And then I reached this little gem:

    'Naruto slumped into his bed, staring at the ceiling. Most of the day, it was easy enough to let his mask control his every action, running around like an idiot and flirting pathetically with Sakura.'

    ...And I quit reading. I HATE the happy mask device. Hate it, hate it, absolutely fucking DESPISE it.
     
  14. Vendo

    Vendo Fourth Year

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    i just wish i knew who Laharl was.
     
  15. Lunarian

    Lunarian Third Year

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    I am reading that story now... just hit the point that LT2000 mentions and I must agree. Worse still the author seems to emphasize mask too much. I think its been mentioned at least twice per paragraph so far. I'm still gonna read it all though cause I liked Laharl's section and hope for more.
     
  16. Vendo

    Vendo Fourth Year

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    Besides the overemphasis on the 'Mask' concept its a fairly good story. It kinda makes me want to go buy Disgea to see what all the fuss is about.
     
  17. Vendo

    Vendo Fourth Year

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    Okay wow, this has got to be the most obscure, odd, and just plain strange Naruto crossover i've encountered to date.

    A NarutoXGOD OF WAR crossover.

    Category: Naruto
    Title: Chosen of Olympus
    Rating: Fiction Rated: M
    Summary: Kage Bunshin wasn't the only thing Naruto learned from the scroll. He somehow managed to end up with a pair of unbelievably powerful weapons chained to his arms, a demon for a mentor, and a god watching him. God of War XOver. NaruHarem, NaruHinaInoTen

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3467653/1/

    *edit

    Oh god, i can't beleive i forgot to post the link...
     
    Last edited: Apr 3, 2007
  18. Jon

    Jon The Demon Mayor Admin DLP Supporter

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    *Points at Vendo.*

    1. Don't double post.

    2. Remember the Link.
     
  19. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Jon, those posts were nearly 10 hours apart. Lol. He couldn't edit the former then.

    But yes, remember the link.
     
  20. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Category: Naruto
    Title: Up From The Shadows
    Rating: Fiction Rated: M
    Summary:Naruto went to bring back Sasuke during training with Jiraiya and manages to succeed but it costs him, his life? Find out whan happened when an unknown person searches for his lost memories and maybe even love. Action in later chapters. NaruHina

    I got the link from a friend (and fellow author) who made me promise to read at least the first couple of chapters. I'm glad he did. I was going to dismiss it after the first, but thankfully the author got a beta. After he got started good (by chapter2) the story became solid gold.
    4.9/5

    Edit:
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3442900/1/

    Sorry, forgot to post the link :S
     
    Last edited: Apr 11, 2007
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