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Naruto Fanfiction List

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Tinder, Feb 11, 2006.

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  1. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Perhaps I should have worded my statement better. "End of one world" is the only good story told from Sasuke's POV that is actually updated.

    I enjoyed "Two Steps Back", but it appears to be abandoned. :| All the stories with a likable Sasuke in them are usually abandoned. Which is a shame actually, he was an interesting character in the beginning of the series.
     
  2. Cxjenious

    Cxjenious Dark Lord

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    I like "End of one world." The author needs a beta, or at least a better one, but it's a good story.
     
  3. Poytin

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    I greatly preferred Ten Ways to Die by this author.
     
  4. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Continuing in a similar vein, here are a few more good Sasuke stories.

    Personally, I think this is one of the better stories I've read. At least, it was last time I read it, which was a while ago. It might have been posted before, but I don't remember if it was. Again, it gets better as it goes on.

    I'm not sure if I like it as much as "End of one world" but it's certainly up there.

    I also like this one. And I'm really irritated that the author won't update. My favorite genre in Naruto FF is teamwork stories, and this one is pretty decent.

    It's amazing how few well-written stories focusing on teamwork there are...
     
  5. Janus

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    Yes, I had forgotten about that one. There are several good stories.

    I've read This Time Around and highly enjoyed it. This was largely because of the whole "hiding the Sharingan" bit, which just begs to be written in detail.

    Haven't read the road less traveled, will.
     
  6. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    The premise isn't that bad, and thw riting isn't awful...

    It's just that there's no conflict. Naruto and everyone share techniques, make money, and talk. It's just really boring.

    It looks like a harem story too, so... the "plot" will only come apart further.

    I couldn't make it to chapter ten. Is it really worth reading to?
     
  7. Cxjenious

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    If you don't like the story, just read chapter ten, and nothing else.
     
  8. Poytin

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    This one is kinda interesting. Naruto the Barbarian

    That is if you can get over the fact they don't distinct scene breaks and the first few chapters are in first person.
     
  9. LogrusMage

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    Got to this line and couldn't get past it.

    That's just poor writing.
     
  10. Iztiak

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    I couldn't get past the evil!cold Hinata beating up her dad.

    I mean, I can read stories like that, but not when it happens at the very beginning of the story, with no explanation whatsoever.

    It's not bad, it's just not the type of story that I like to read.

    It also doesn't appear to focus on Naruto, which is one of the primary criteria for me reading a long story.
     
  11. Poytin

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    Never said the writing was good just that it was kinda interesting. Yeah the gradual shift away from Naruto almost makes it fail but I'll continue reading just for the fact I don't have anything better to do.
     
  12. LogrusMage

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    Barbarian!Naruto is a kick ass idea. Naruto the Barbarian is a possibly EPIC scenario. But that one... bleh. He tries to hard to make it epic, and ends up HYPER-failing.
     
  13. Poytin

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    It actually seems to be a cross of Naruto and Conan the Barbarian... interesting isn't it?
     
  14. LogrusMage

    LogrusMage Supreme Mugwump

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    Very. It's just not good.
     
  15. Jon

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    <_< >_>

    A nice story to read. Read it the other day, very enjoyable minus MONSTROUS FORM!
     
  16. LogrusMage

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    Oh like you wouldn't turn into a Crash Bandicoot rip off if you could <_<
     
  17. Chime

    Chime Dark Lord

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    Awesome, Disgaea crossover. I've always wanted to try crossing Disgaea with something, since Laharl, Flonne, and Etna are just fun characters to write.

    Dood.

    A little off topic, but are there any (good?) Disgaea/HP stories? Hah...
     
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  18. Iztiak

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    All these crossovers I've never heard of... Or only heard about in passing at least.

    Ok, I'll bite. What's Disgaea?
     
  19. Jon

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    Google is your friend you lazy bitch.

    Couldn't find any HP/D crosses from a quick look.
     
  20. Chime

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    Too bad.

    Disgaea is a pretty decent RPG/Strategy game for the PS3/PS2/PSP/(DS coming soon). The first game is about a demon prince's rise to power after his father dies. It's pretty amusing and is filled with self-depreciating humor and anime/manga references. A niche audience (weaboos) is what it appeals to... you can grind up to level 9999 too lol (and with reincarnation, you can get stats into the trillions). There's also an anime of it... though I wouldn't recommend it.
     
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