It takes elements from Superman, Kim Possible and Winx Club but it's all contained in the Harry Potter universe. I mainly would like a second eye with the plotlines and the worldbuilding to make sure all the threads connect properly. Any takers?

 

Or you could just post it in WbA like everyone else.

 

WbA?

 

To be fair @Download it's kind of hard putting yourself out in WbA if you're new knowing the story will get shredded. I think people would be more confident if they have a beta check it for basic readability (the shit or not shit test) before a post.

@ReadingGoodStuff if you PM me, I'm willing to give it a read. BTW, in the future, you might want to add a summary to grab attention as opposed to just listing tropes.