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Need a Beta reader for semi-crossover.

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by ReadingGoodStuff, Mar 25, 2019.

  1. ReadingGoodStuff

    ReadingGoodStuff Muggle

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    It takes elements from Superman, Kim Possible and Winx Club but it's all contained in the Harry Potter universe. I mainly would like a second eye with the plotlines and the worldbuilding to make sure all the threads connect properly. Any takers?
     
  2. Download

    Download Dark Lord DLP Supporter

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    Or you could just post it in WbA like everyone else.
     
  3. ReadingGoodStuff

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    WbA?
     
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    To be fair @Download it's kind of hard putting yourself out in WbA if you're new knowing the story will get shredded. I think people would be more confident if they have a beta check it for basic readability (the shit or not shit test) before a post.

    @ReadingGoodStuff if you PM me, I'm willing to give it a read. BTW, in the future, you might want to add a summary to grab attention as opposed to just listing tropes.
     
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