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Need a Beta Reader

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by neren, Jun 9, 2008.

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Jun 9, 2008 #1

Hey, anyone want to help me out and beta my story? I'm not sure if I should throw it in the WBA section or where I should post it.

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There was no source of light but Harry could see clearly, lit by the stars above him and the Aurora Borealis-like streams of magic flowing around him. There was an ugly beauty to it, within the pristine and fresh looking yet twisted and gnarled trees. A brief rustle came from behind him, causing him to gasp and draw in a quick breath.

Harry twisted the Resurrection Stone while covering himself with the Invisibility Cloak, calling a lost soul to his side. He was not completely powerless without his wand nor would he be fighting alone.
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Jun 9, 2008 #2

Just chunk into the WBA section and Oz or someone will point every little flaw. In the interests of helping you of couse........

Harry sighed, wiping a tired hand across his face. "I understand why you did what you did, Bruce. The point is you didn't need to blow up three buses, two boats, a nunnery, and a toy poodle."

"I don't like poodles," muttered Batman, looking rather like a child being scolded.

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