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Complete New Blood by JFalcon - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by TMNTurtwig, Oct 10, 2011.

  1. TMNTurtwig

    TMNTurtwig Professor

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    Title: New Blood
    Author: JFalcon
    Rating: T
    Fandom: Naruto
    Pairing: Predominatly Shikamaru/Temari
    Summary: For three years the ninja of Konoha and their allies have fought a losing battle. When Konoha becomes so short handed that Shikamaru must train a Genin squad no one could have predicted the effect he and his team would have on the war. ShikaTema

    Link: New Blood

    This is the only next generation series I read. It is long as all hell (almost 1,000,000 words across four stories), but its dark and actiony and enjoyable. The characters are written in a believable way and the story in general is well written. My only complaint reading it was that Shikamaru had his genin shadow clone training, but at least that was brief and not overdone. Even though just one shadow clone should have killed a genin.

    The story is AU after about Asuma's death since it was written back in '06. All in all an enjoyable read. I rate it a 4.5/5 because there were some parts that grated on my nerves.
     
  2. disposablehead

    disposablehead Seventh Year

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    I'm twelve chapters in (out of 170) and I'm enjoying it. Good action scenes, cute little genin, some interesting plots.

    *edit: I got bored around chapter 40. Too many characters, dull relationship drama, and far too man exclamation marks. It might get better, but I really can't be bothered to find out. 3/5
     
    Last edited: Oct 15, 2011
  3. TMNTurtwig

    TMNTurtwig Professor

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    That was my main problem with it too, though once Akuma is introduced and the story starts getting darker it gets a lot better.
     
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