Title: Of Gods and Mortals
Author: Rhyllen
Rating: T
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Pairing: Harry x OC
Status: Complete
Summary: When he was young, Harry supressed his magic, and thus never got his letter, thought to be dead to the wizards. 12 years later, his magic is released, and to be sure that he hurts no one, he is sent back to Atlantis to train. HxOC, reposted with permission.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2705649/1/

I got in contact w/ Rhyllen, got the WHOLE trilogy, and was told that I was allowed to repost them on FF.Net. For those that have been looking for them, look no farther.

 

they werent bad... a little ... over the top sometimes but yeah... not bad i guess...

 

Well, with me, I got halfway through it, then forgot because of school, and when I looked again, no more stories. He apparently took them down because of people complaining about stolen work and crap.

Edit: BTW Vash, nice avatar you got there.

 

Just about to read it but you said it's a trilogy although you only posted the one story. Unless you combined them all into the one 40k word story?

 

Nah, haven't posted them all yet, because I can't give a summary of the last two, as I haven't read them yet. I'm going to read through the last two, and post them some time this weekend.

 

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its dull

 

ah...crap I actually was reading another story when I offered my prelimiary review...the chapters are a bit short...actually short to the point that it's hard to develop a story with it...decent starting idea though.

 

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Agreed. I can't seem to get into the fic at all. It just doesn't suit my tastes.

 

Your posts all sound positively gleeful! is it actually worth it? whats the pairing going to be?

 

I think that its worth it. The pairings are Harry/OC. Try it out, the second one is up, just click on my name after you read the first one.

 

I read all 3 in the last 24 hour and i liked the fic but it is some whatr dull it needs more action!

 

Yeh i concur with Necros needs a bit more action and i think it should of started abit earlier on in his life instead of making him so old!

 

I would have perfered it be harry/multi but to each is on

 

I just read them all...and well they are pretty dull like things are so rushed, with a bad dipiction of the God's and Goddess' with a strong emphesis on things that are so ridiculasly (sp?) stupid and so far out there that make up the story! meh *shrugs* still i admit i did kinda enjoy it.

 

It's somewhat boring for me and the chapters are too short for my liking. Would be great if the chapters were longer.

 

this fic would improve if someone rewrote it to correct the errors and wrote a dark harry verion

 

I think four years ago, this story would have been three stars.

Now...

BOY!

That word written in capitals is a quick way of determining fail.

Grammar fail. I'm not even being picky. Show me a situation where this author correctly makes use of a question mark.

I hope I don't have to point out what's wrong here.

Fail/5

 

Moldivort. ALL CAPS OF AMUCHNESS. Car-obsessed Harr. "Dorkly" in place of Dursley. Author feels a need to explain what a steel-toed boot is. Infix author's notes.

Not Library quality. 2/5.

 

This one is definitely not library worthy, and it breaks several rules all on it's own. I've read worse stories but this definitely should be moved. 2/5