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WIP On A Cross and Arrow by Terrichance - T -MLP:FiM

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by disposablehead, Oct 17, 2011.

2.75/5, 4 votes
  1. disposablehead

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    Oct 17, 2011 #1
    Title: On a Cross and Arrow
    Author: Terrichance
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor/Friendship
    Pairing: Mostly Everyone/Doppelganger, but it varies
    Status: Work in Progress
    Fandom: MLP:FiM
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7211729/1/On_a_Cross_and_Arrow
    Summary: Twilight and her friends are transported during a botched spell, across dimensions to... Ponyville, Equestria? But not the same one. In a library across town, six stallions join their forces as they try uncover the appearance of their filly look-alikes!

    It's the old botched-teleportation-sends-everyone-to-a-genderswapped-universe-where-they-fall-for-themselves paradigm. A classic.

    The story is slow until the ponies start to meet themselves, and then the awesomeness becomes mathematical. Fluttershy X Brony!Fluttershy= too fucking adorable for words. The Rarity/Elusive(Gentleman!Rarity) scenes, which rapidly become a mutant fusion of Bodice-Rippers and the Gai/Lee dynamic, are comedy gold.

    My biggest problem is that Pinky Pie ^ 2 was only pretty funny. How could two Pinkie Pies be only pretty funny? Still, 4.5/5 rounded up.