On My Own by Ulkser - M

Lord North · Nov 8, 2005

and confederatefly7@hotmail.com

ip82 · Nov 15, 2005

Why don't you post the story somewhere, if you already have it all typed down?

Preferably on FFN, under a disposable user-name, just to spite them.

Lord Osiris · Dec 13, 2005

Umm any chance that anyone having access to this story, could you send it my way please? bboarder4life@hotmail.com cheers.

Mrriddler · Dec 13, 2005

Where's the author? Did he decide to stop writing? I actually got up to chapter 9 somewhere I think. If someone actually if usker can give me the greenlight, I could post it on forum here...

Lord Osiris · Dec 13, 2005

His kind of dissapeared so i dunno about that green light! yeh he only did up to chapter 9 and i want it! oh yeh of topic but i loved the up date Riddle! good stuff.

ulkser · Dec 13, 2005

WHY DO YOU NOT READ THE FIRST MESSAGES!!!?????

i will not continue with this story and any of you could write it!!!!!

i give you the green light or whatever you want. if you want to continue it then please continue it. just say "i take this story from ulkser". you may use ideas from it or anything you want!!!!!!

OK!?????

Mrriddler · Dec 13, 2005

Oo.. oh sorry k. I'll upload it on the forums.

edit: all 9 chapters uploaded. http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?t=1160

Schilling · Feb 13, 2006

well, I decided to edit and repost this story on FF.nutsack, so if you liked it check for under my profile, which is Triscuit0

bornagainpenguin · Feb 13, 2006

Schilling said:

well, I decided to edit and repost this story on FF.nutsack, so if you liked it check for under my profile, which is Triscuit0
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The only Triscuit that shows up is someone called TriscuitTheFlyingSnkCracker...

--bornagainpenguin

Schilling · Feb 13, 2006

nm
i've posted the first chapter and i've decided that i'm going to change it quite a bit. if that doesn't work, then i'll still have the original chapters to switch it around

bornagainpenguin · Feb 13, 2006

Schilling said:

nm
i've posted the first chapter and i've decided that i'm going to change it quite a bit. if that doesn't work, then i'll still have the original chapters to switch it around
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Could you post a link?

--bornagainpenguin

Goddessa39 · Feb 28, 2006

Address

I like it alot, but could you put the adress up so that we who don't know where you posted it can find it please.

Mrriddler · Feb 28, 2006

The old version is posted on here.

http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?t=1160&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=0

rambos_hier · Mar 13, 2006

New link

the new version link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2798216/1/

bornagainpenguin · Mar 15, 2006

Re: New link

Thanks guys!

--bornagainpenguin

Scrittore · Aug 21, 2009

Alright well, I finally found a working link for this story in the 2nd to last post. It's two chapters, and abandoned which doesn't mean well for it's chances in my opinion for wanting it to stay in the library.

So we start with Harry having nightmares about Sirius in the first chapter. He wakes up, and there's a bit of angst to say the least.

‘Why me? Why am I alive? Why can not I have a normal happy life? Why do I have to be Harry bloody Potter, the-boy-who-always-suffers? Why was I not strong enough to save Sirius?’ these questions were running through his mind since the events in DOM. Through out those two weeks he looked for the answers to the questions. Although he could not find the answers, he came up with an idea. He now knew he had to be strong to defeat Voldemort. He did not believe in the prophecy. He would fight this war not because of a prophecy. He would fight to avenge his loved ones’ deaths. He would make Tom Riddle suffer.

While he was pondering these thoughts, Hedwig flied in to his room. She came from delivering Harry’s letter to Order which contained the words ‘I am fine’. At the thought of the Order his mind went to a certain Headmaster. Harry knew that Dumbledore was also responsible for Sirius’ death and his miserable life.

‘Why didn’t he tell me the prophecy before? Why did he avoid me during last year? Why did not he give me occlumency lessons himself instead of Snape? If it is so safe here, then why do I have watchdogs for 24 hours?’ as he continued to think about Dumbledore his anger began to rise. The air in his room became heavy with the magic. Hedwig began to have difficulty breathing. Air began to crackle and the objects on his table started to vibrate. Harry knew he had to relax or his accidental magic would cause a problem with the Ministry and it was the last thing he wanted to deal with.
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One word about that entire piece: Unoriginal.

First he had to go to Gringott’s to withdraw some money. Then he would buy books, both light and dark. He decided to learn the Dark Arts. As to why Harry did that? Well, First of all he had to know what he would face, secondly he would give them some of their own medicine, thirdly and most importantly, he had to be able to do magic, so he could practice what he learned

Then he had to find a place to live. He couldn’t stay with his relatives anymore. Although this summer they had been nicer than before, he had had enough of them to last a whole lifetime.

He decided to leave that moment. He immediately grabbed his father’s invisibility cloak, the Marauder’s Map (I won’t come back here to collect anything, he thought.) and his wand. He didn’t take his trunk.
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*Tries his hardest to not rage at the cliche of Gringotts and Dark Arts.*

$100 bucks says if it shows Gringotts that Griphook or Ragnok show up.

After ten minutes, Harry stood in front of the bank. He thought it would be closed at night but he tried his chance. He learned that wizarding banks were different from the muggle banks. They worked 24 hours a day, fortunately.

He entered the bank and went to the nearest goblin. He was surprised when he noticed the goblin was Griphook.
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FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

“Hi, Griphook! I want to visit my vault and withdraw some money. Here is the key.” Harry was taken aback by the shocked expression on Griphook’s face. “Did I say something wrong?” he asked.

Griphook took the key and said “Oh no Mr. Potter. Wizards don’t bother to know our names. They do not respect us. So when you called me by my name I am surprised. Actually we are expecting you. However, you did not mention Sirius Black’s will. Did you not know about it?”
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He'll become a Lord and get a bunch of stuff for $100 Alex.

Because you are now Lord Potter, I will inform you about their assets. A manor in Godric’s Hallow…” Harry cut Griphook’s speech and said “I know the manors Griphook. However, I have some requests from you. I want you to repair Godric’s Hallow. Also put all the things in all my vaults in the Potter family vault. It will be much easier that way. Can you do these please?”
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Sigh..

Now we'll probably learn that Hermione and Ron were betraying Harry while TonksTwins, and maybe Moody are on his side.

The Weasley’s moved to the HQ because of security reasons. The Burrow was not safe enough and Arthur, Bill and Charlie were placing wards whenever they had free time. Also it was decided by Dumbledore to make Ron and Hermione full members to the Order. They had been reporting everything about Harry to Headmaster. They were forced to become friends with Harry during their first year in order keep close tabs on him.
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What do you know, I'm psychic.

Tonks refused to teach them because she believed Harry needed training not them. She was also upset about Harry’s living arrangements and recommended to move him HQ but Dumbledore rejected this. When Dumbledore rejected Tonks’ request, she stormed out of the meeting room and did not come back to any Order meetings .The only Order related thing she did was guarding Harry.
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No really, Miss Cleo has nothing on me.

The other two rooms were bedrooms too. One of the rooms was the library. It was not as big as the library in Hogwarts but one can store 10000 books here. The rags were empty and there was a single parchment on a study table. Harry picked up the parchment and read the note on it.
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OVER 9000!!!!

The books are now stored in Grimmauld Place. In order to bring the books here place your hand on this parchment say ‘bring the books’. All the books which belong to Black family will be transported to here wherever they are.

Also you can write the name of the subject you want to study here and this parchment will show you the useful books about that subject.
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Of course, why not just imprint the damn knowledge into his head author. :/

He went to the basement. The stairs and corridors were lightened by floating candles instead of enchanted ceilings. There were three doors in this floor. The first door on the right was belonged to a potions lab. It was a big lab and the substances were nearly touched. Some of the substances were very rare that Snape would run naked around the school to have them. Harry was determined to learn potions. Even if he couldn’t make Snape’s class, he would study and take the newt exam of the potions
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Of course this stuff has everything Harry requires. It wouldn't be too much of a cliche without it.

“Is there anything I can help you, sir?” asked the girl. She was tall and blonde. She had sparkling blue eyes. However, what caught Harry’s attention were her big breasts. He could not take his eyes from girl’s chest. He thanked God that the hood covered his whole face. He had a little bit difficulty to find words.

“Yes. I want a whole wardrobe, everything from socks to dress robes. Money is no problem. I want top quality.” He said. The girl’s eyes were widened. If she could pull this purchase, she would not need to work for the rest of the summer.
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The straw that broke the camel's back, shopping. Of course, this girl goes to Hogwarts as a 7th year student where Harry lies saying he is a 7th year named James. That he was also home schooled.

“They will be ready in four hours, James. Would you like to pay now or when you get the robes?” she asked. “Now.” Harry simply said. He paid 10000 galleons and an extra 1000 to Jessica for her service. Jessica was beyond shocked by the generosity; she received congratulations from Madam Malkin.
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$100,000 dollars in clothes, $10,000 tip. He better of gotten "special service", but probably not.

“I have problem with my eyesight. Do you know a potion or anything else that can correct my sight?” Harry asked. “I don’t know a potion that will cure your eyes but I have magical lenses. Once put on, they will fuse with your corneas so they will not fall. They will automatically adjust your eyes. They will have standard charms like everlasting, waterproof, anti-summoning. If you want I can charm them to have different colors. If you have an Auror license I can also put the charm that will let you to see through objects like walls, invisibility cloaks and that sort of things.”
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*Turns into the Hulk and rampages*

“What do you want lad?” asked the bartender. “I want a pensieve. Don’t tell me you don’t have one because I know you have. Money is no problem. Now retrieve the item.” Harry bellowed and tried to make his voice sound dangerous. The man believed his bluff and looked scared.
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This book is written by me, Salazar Slytherin. It contains potions, spells, rituals that I created. I never shared the knowledge in this book with anyone. You will see the other pages of the book are empty. It is because you have to give a wizard’s oath for not to share anyone the knowledge in this book. After you give the oath the writings will appear. However, you will not be able to read the other pages if you doesn’t the read the pages before it. I organize this because everything in the book has an order and if you skipped a part and do the next thing the consequences will not be nice.
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“I am sure I will like them. Don’t worry.” He said and took the bag. He just turned to leave, Jessica hold his arm. Harry turned around; found himself face to face with Jessica. She placed a small kiss on his lips under the hood and whispered “Owl me ok? Maybe we can eat sometime together huh?”

Harry totally shocked when she kissed him. He felt like his blood was on fire and boiling. His heart rate increased. He smiled and said in a low voice “Of course, I will owl you. How can I skip a chance to have a nice time with a gorgeous girl like you? Do I look so dumped? I am hurt.” He said and Jessica broke into a fit of giggles. This time Harry kissed her briefly and left a dazed girl behind.
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O.O

For the love of everything, get this fic out of the Library. 1/5.

Jeram · Sep 9, 2009

Ooh a neglected fic!

Plot: What the hell is this? STUPID.
1.0

Characterization: Horrific.
1.0

Originality: Cliches include OhNoSiriusIsDead, UnnecessaryAcronyms, ShoppingSpree,
PuppetMaster!Dumbledore, AnnoyingNewCharacters, HarryTrainsInEverything, BrandNewHarry
1.0

Entertainment: Uh, no.
1.0

Technical: Many mistakes.
1.0

Potential: Not a chance in hell.
1.0

COULD I EVEN FINISH IT?
Yeah, but it's under 7K words

Chapter & Word Count/Review Ratio: 2 chapters, 6,480 words, 52 reviews or
26 reviews per chapter / 124 words per review => Lucky idiot author

Rating (average + handicaps): 1.0

Andro's Sliding Scale of Fanfic Reviews Says:

Or: Don't even bother.

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