Title: Ordinatio
Author: LiquidDreamLAD
Rating: T
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2836187/1/
Status: Work in Progress - Last updated 4-7-06
Words: 23438 (7 chapters)
It's been five years since the fall of Voldemort and the loss of Harry Potter, some have moved on, some have not. And now a new group has arisen, garbed in black, they hunt the users of the dark arts without mercy.

One of the better Post-Canon stories ive run across, a pleasent change from the cliche Independant!Harry stories floating around...true it does stink of H/HR...but at least it's not H/G, and the characters act a bit more adult than the teenage versions of themselves while staying in character.

 

I did not like this fic, Hes much better at Naruto fics.

1st chapter was to confusing i personally think.


/Myst

 

I don't really like it. It's good when you have nothing else to read, but it's nothing special. I don't like the way the way that Weasleys are acting or the way that Harry is acting. They keep accusing him and he just lets them. Hermione is...I don't even know how to describe it. Ron is too stupid and rash and I don't like him either. The idea is not bad, and I like the assassin and secret organisations fics. But it could have been done better.

 

Had great potential. but that all swings on how much crap harry takes off the old crowd.

gotta love harry with kick ass moves and a sword. its just so much better then the pansy ass he is in cannon.

It is POST cannon though. and i tend not to bother with them because most of them become far too complexe and mess it up. or centralise around hogwarts for the next bazillion years.

 

I read the first chapter and it sounds like one of those crazy far fetched main character = super powerful stories. Boring... The idea behind the story is pretty solid but if the author took out the super power shit then it would be good.

 

This one's not really worthy of the library. It's only 29k words long, and never really got beyond setting up its initial premise. It's been abandoned for three years.

The idea is that Harry disappeared after killing Voldemort and became part of a secret group of assassins who combat darkness. He returns just in time to break up Hermione's marriage to Ron, and what we get is an unsettling mix of relationship angst and terrible battle scenes between Harry, his OC partner, and a bunch of dark creatures.

The idea might be salvageable if the writing weren't so bad. The author makes frequent grammar mistakes and misspells things like 'Granger' as 'Grainger.' The narrative jumps from scene to scene without transition, leaving you wondering just what in the hell is going on.

Not worth the effort. 2/5

 

You know, the writing isn’t that bad, but the story is too unconvincing in how the super-cool assassin group operates. Yeah, I don’t know either, but it’s too clear the writer doesn’t know either.

1/5 for insane levels of campiness.