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[WIP] Ouroboros by Voice of the Nephilim - M

Discussion in 'Review Board' started by warner, May 19, 2017.

  1. warner

    warner Disappeared

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    Title: Ouroboros
    Author: Voice of the Nephilim
    Rating: M
    Genre: Horror
    Status: Work in Progress
    Library Category: Dark Arts
    Pairings: Harry/Bellatrix
    Summary: The cruel, beautiful smile, the predatory violet eyes of his torturer, lover and savior, Bellatrix Lestrange, ensnared him. Even after escape she became his sole obsession. To feel her touch again Harry will tear apart the Wizarding world, stone by stone.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6927447/1/Ouroboros

    This is the best and most realistic Harry/Bella fic written. 5/5
     
  2. Tragen

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    Why do you believe the story to be the best of this pairing? What’s so great about it? Pros? Any cons? This is a textbook example of a bad post. Please refer to the Review Board Rule and Post Format. Entice me to click the link with your opinion.
     
  3. MonkeyEpoxy

    MonkeyEpoxy Alchemist

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    Do y'all like torture porn? This is great torture porn from what I remember.
     
  4. tomthumb

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    An interesting start and I'm willing to keep an eye on it to see where it goes but I can't agree with it being the best harry/bellatrix fic ever, realistic maybe because there isn't a real way this pairing could occur without it being forced on one or both.
     
  5. JokeIsAbsolute

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    Well done.