Okay, I've ready these 20 chapters so far. Yes there is a bit of cliche in this story. But quite frankly with literally thousands of HP fanfics cliches are practally impossible to avoid. Over all I do find the charactisations to be slightly off from the canon...not terribly so, just enough to make the story work. The writing style is okay, and apart from fliping points of view in a couple of chapters which I find personally annoying it is quite well written. Over all I think this gets an easy 4/5.