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Oneshot Paranoia By CrimsonNoble - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by Antivash, Jun 15, 2008.

4.0769200325012/5, 13 votes
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  1. Croaker

    Croaker First Year

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    Jul 2, 2008 #21
    I laughed.


    Like other's have said, though I liked it, I don't know if it would be interesting as a longer work. Maybe if it didn't go down the route of pissing and moaning about the arm and eye, it'd be okay.
     
  2. BlitzkriegAngel

    BlitzkriegAngel Vayash Moru DLP Supporter

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    Jul 3, 2008 #22
    I enjoyed it somewhat. Could be a good full lengther. 3.5/5.
     
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