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WIP Passageways by jerrway69 - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Azotez, Jan 30, 2013.

  1. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    Uh. What. The last four or so chapters are miles above the average FF.net politic plots, which are so retarded some monkeys with a typewriter would do better. So granted, that A) isn't very hard to achieve, and B) still doesn't make it exactly great, but it makes it readable enough so that I can enjoy it. It's more or less exactly like Delende Est used to be.

    And yes, of course Harry was replaced. After all, that's the point.

    Edit: And the "UST" at the beginning (which was Harry refusing to fuck her, while she was throwing herself at him, and both being awkward about it) was almost as annoying as his breakdowns and whatever the hell else happened at the beginning that I've already forgotten.
     
  2. psihary

    psihary Groundskeeper

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    I'm at chapter 18 now, and I can't stop thinking how much I want to read this story without "Lady Hogwards", the 40 bottomless trunks of gold, the most noble and ancient house of magical ninjas, and especially without all scenes where Albus Dumbledore makes an appearance.

    ... and also why do they always get them married, I just don't get it, they are 15, right?

    Have to admit though that I'll continue reading it :).