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Physical Education by Adrian Tullberg - K+ ( Two Shot )

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Paravon, Jun 21, 2007.

2.7999999523163/5, 10 votes
  1. Paravon

    Paravon Seventh Year

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    Jun 21, 2007 #1
    Title: Physical Education
    Author: Adrian Tullberg
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Humor
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: N/A
    Status: Undeclared
    Summary: New P.E. Teacher arrives. A short crossover.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2557009/1/

    A different take on the 'new teacher'. There isn't much to say without spoiling it, but it is well written - for it's limited scope.
     
  2. Oujou Akaash

    Oujou Akaash Unspeakable

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    Jun 21, 2007 #2
    I gotta admit that was funny as hell. Since i don't read this types of fics Wade pulled me into it. And anyone who knows wade knows there is chaos and this guy pulled it off well...as well as one can when it comes to Deadpool.:chainsaw:
     
  3. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin DLP Supporter

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    Jun 21, 2007 #3
    Awful. I didn't even get a chuckle out of this. 0/5.
     
  4. kit

    kit Second Year

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    Jun 21, 2007 #4
    I suppose knowing who Deadpool is adds to the overall hilarity. KIT SAYS YES! 5/5
     
  5. Snarf

    Snarf Squanchin' Party Bro! ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jun 21, 2007 #5
    I agree with Lord Ravenclaw, this was a major drag. 1.5/5 just because it's amusing to think about the possibilities of a talented author remaking a story like this. Sadly, I have a bit of an inkling who Deadpool is.
     
  6. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    Jun 22, 2007 #6
    Tullberg is a master of these shorts. Most are funny, but he can write the full range of "meta" Human experiance. He mostly deals with DC comics and did about five takes on Marvels "civil war" story line. He is a person to look to put on you author alert if you are a person that enjoys a quick laugh or a twisted view once a month.
     
  7. Giovanni

    Giovanni God of Scotch

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    Jun 22, 2007 #7
    Anybody can do a page long meta on the human experience.

    I'm very tempted to prove it.
     
  8. Dark Magic

    Dark Magic Denarii Host

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    Jun 22, 2007 #8
    How pointless. This story didn't even make me smile.

    2/5
     
  9. Nuhuh

    Nuhuh Dastardly Shadow Admin Retired Staff

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    Jun 22, 2007 #9
    This was hilarious. Now the thing is, you obviously have had to have read Deadpool comics, otherwise this is pointless. But if you know who he is and his general personality this is funny as hell.

    Admittedly I filled in what I know of Wilson Wade for this fic, so for me this was a great read.

    "Fat, Fifty and Frisky" XD

    4/5
     
  10. malaga

    malaga Auror

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    Jun 22, 2007 #10
    It was okay. It would have sucked except for two lines

    That made me smile briefly. 2/5 + 1 bonus point for killing/torturing Draco.
    3/5
     
  11. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Jun 22, 2007 #11
    I have no idea with what fandom does this crosses with, but regardless, I guess it was worth a few chuckles.
     
  12. thapagan

    thapagan High Inquisitor

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    Jun 22, 2007 #12
    Deadpool is a marvel title. He is a superpowered merc, with a scarred face, a foul mouth and often gets into comic situations.
     
  13. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Jun 23, 2007 #13
    Good for a chuckle I suppose, despite me never having read Deadpool before. I liked the bit where he chased people with a chainsaw >XD (we need an evil looking smiley).

    Aekiel
     
  14. Teal_Thanatos

    Teal_Thanatos First Year

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    Jun 24, 2007 #14
    This had me laughing so hard my gut hurt the first time I read it.

    And the second, and mostly through my third too.

    And then it got posted here, and I read it again, and it didn't quite make my stomach hurt this time, but it was close..

    5/5/
     
  15. 007_rock

    007_rock DA Member

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    Jun 24, 2007 #15
    Not even worth the time spent reading it. Somehow it doesn't strike me as that funny.

    1/5
     
  16. Feoffic

    Feoffic Alchemist DLP Supporter

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    Jun 25, 2007 #16
    You have to know Deadpool to get this...or just have a really odd (or bad) sense of humour, fortunatly I have both. 5/5