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WIP Precocious Witches and Where to Find Them by Vernerama

Discussion in 'Review Board' started by PWIZDUO, Apr 22, 2025.

3.9565217494965/5, 23 votes
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  1. Rin

    Rin Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter

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    May 4, 2026 #41
    I've been enjoying this. I'm looking forward to seeing her and Harry get together.
     
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    Rin Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter

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    Jul 23, 2026 #42
    Sorry for the double-post, but since this has updated a few chapters since my last post. I liked the way the Pettigrew arc wrapped up. I would have done the same thing.

    The way she bound Mrs. Malfoy, too, was great.

    That said, I want to see more Sylvia/Harry interactions. I think the author is building toward that, but 60 chapters in, with an average update speed of 1 chapter/17 days (which is up from 1/15 when I first began reading this in May, then 1/16 in June). However, she’s got an average chapter length of 6,218 words, so I can’t complain.

    I like that she’s accidentally made Astrid “magical”.
     
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