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Abandoned Random by megamatt09 - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by krpton, May 25, 2010.

  1. krpton

    krpton Squib

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    Title: Random
    Author: megamatt09
    Rating: M
    Genre: Humor
    DLP Category: Humor/Parody
    Pairing: None at the moment
    Words: 41,119
    Chapters: 12
    Updated: March 31, 2011
    Published: October 20, 2009
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary: A bunch of completely illogical and random things happen for no sensible reason whatsoever.

    Link:- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5456278/1/Random
    Link: http://fictionhunt.com/read/5456278/1

    Basically Pretty much self explanatory in summary but what caught my attention in this fic is that the author has fully managed to capture the "insanity" of harry potter.

    Harry thinks there's no such thing as a magical world and all that he sees is just an elaborate sham created by alien overlord dumbledore intent on taking over the world.

    Doesn't seem to have a plot or going in any direction, updates are sporadic and eight chapters so far, Writing is top notch, recommended for a light casual read.
    i'd rate it at 4/5



    Edit by Minion, Jan. 2, 2016
    I added a link to fictionhunt.
    If I linked a wrong story, or if you know where to find another copy of the story, please inform the library staff.
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jan 2, 2016
  2. Jeram

    Jeram Elder of Zion ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    This was somewhat amusing. Cliches, sure, etc. But some of the parodies are actually annoying to read, not funny, so the author needs to be careful. I'd say 3/5 for now.
     
  3. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    It lives up to its name, I'll give it that much. It has its up points and its shit points. 3/5

     
  4. MarquisBlack

    MarquisBlack First Year

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    Two things about this passage confuse me.

    First off, how does one, in fact, get inside a Librarian (sex jokes aside)? :?

    Secondly, I wasn't aware that the Internet could be "got."

    Yes, I'm aware I'm nitpicking at this point, but still...

    EDIT: Got a little further into the story now.

    The Mary Sue cliché parody is...mediocre, at best. I mean, parodies are supposed to make you laugh in ridicule at the parodied element, right? With "Magnifica," I, at most, felt utter disinterest.

    The "wizards are really aliens" side of the story is quite amusing, on the other hand. Harry's sanity (or lack thereof) is mostly entertaining, but can get tedious at times. I particularly enjoyed the Gringotts scene in Chapter 2.

    EDIT Part II: Just one last thing.

    Rodney: ...Why?!

    3/5
     
    Last edited: May 28, 2010
  5. Innomine

    Innomine Alchemist ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    This was absolutely fucking terrible.

    1/5
     
  6. mknote

    mknote 1/3 of the Note Bros. DLP Supporter

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    I just died laughing at points. 4/5.
     
  7. The Santi

    The Santi Professor

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    I really didn't like this. I thought the fic came off as stupid, not funny. 2/5.
     
  8. Archer

    Archer Fourth Year DLP Supporter

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    That was pretty dumb. 1/5.
     
  9. Clerith

    Clerith Ahegao Emperor ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    This is so bad it's moderately amusing. Chapter 6 actually made me laugh a few times.

    3/5
     
  10. Terrai

    Terrai Second Year

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    Marquis, that is not true, the INTERNETS can be got.

    [​IMG]

    Back on topic, it is a crackfic and I will rate it on crackfic terms. 3/5 for some random hilarity in some parts of the story.
    [​IMG]
     
  11. krpton

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    Okay, I take this back, the new chapter updated is absolute fucking terrible; it seems like the author is looking too hard to make this a crack fic... *sigh* Another example of a moderately good fic going bad T_T

    ... A "moderately fic" going "shit insane"?
     
    Last edited: Jun 1, 2010
  12. EthyleneGlycol

    EthyleneGlycol Second Year

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    There really isn't anything 'good' about it and it definitely feels as if the author is trying too hard, but the absurdity and randomness made me laugh out loud enough for it to get a decent rating.

    3.5/5 rounded up to 4.

     
    Last edited: May 31, 2010
  13. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    This made me lol pretty hard actually.

    The rest of the chapter had its share of suck moments though, so the fic is keeping to its on again off again ways.
     
    Last edited: May 31, 2010
  14. Shinysavage

    Shinysavage Madman With A Box ~ Prestige ~

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    Tried the first couple of chapters, but didn't really get on with it. It's not a complete failure, there were a few moments that did make me snigger, but they were the exceptions. 2/5
     
  15. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Update on the state of the story:

    A 12-chapter version is available on fictionhunt and I added the link in the original post.

    PM me if it I linked a wrong story.
     
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