Title: Re-run
Author: Selenepotter
Rating: R
Category:action/adventure, romance
Link: http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544215809
Summary: AU & Time Travel, Luna goes back in time to change the timeline. Very short chapters until Chapter 6, when the story really begins. I wasn't sure if this should be posted in Independant Harry instead. This is my first attempt at a totally non-smut fic.

 

Re: Re-run by Selenepotter

Kind of hard to tell...

I just noticed it now (well, when I was doing a complete check out of all the fics posted to this board I noticed, but was busy focusing on getting those stories posted here first then forgot to go back to it... and then I started downloading it for myself after checking to make sure there weren't any updates on your Dies the.. series..) and I'm finding the premise entertaining.

The thing is...Luna? ..and has she thought so far ahead so as to know what to do when her future knowledge dries up or becomes unusable when she changes events too much? I'm only in the first few chapters so maybe you answered those questions already...

--bornagainpenguin (who agrees with you that this is a hard story to categorize)

 

my Dies the Fire crossover fics.

I didn't think anyone was reading my Dies the Fire Crossover fics.

The Dudley Durlsey and Dies the Fire has been completely betaed at this point and it is complete.

The Paliament's War has reached a stopping place for now. (at least until the next book comes out) But I haven't posted it all and won't until my beta has a chance to beta the last few chapters.

After that gets completed, I plan to finish Wizard on the Sea of Time.

But currently, I'm working on Re-run.

 

Re: my Dies the Fire crossover fics.

I'm enjoying Re-Run ATM, this line from chapter six cracked me up:

“If you ever, EVER, do anything to hurt my daughter, I will cut off your head, make fun of it, then apparate it into the middle of the ocean where it will be used as shark bait! And I’m not talking about the one on your shoulders either!”

I started giggling at the 'make fun of it' part and lost it as I read the rest.

I'm probably not the best one to give criticsm of the fics though because I tend to be omnivorous with my reading. I do wonder at your age sometimes though to be brutally honest. And there could be a lot more fleshing things out too..that said I'd have recommended you combine chapters 1-5 together into a single slightly fleshed out prologue and write chapter six as Chapter one and chapter seven as two. That's just IMHO though. I don't know what others would say.

That said I greatly prefer the way you have it now to the usual 'let's rewrite the HP series from book one only slightly changing things' trap many fall into and often get stuck on blindly trudging through the cannon they forget the story they [i[really[/i] wanted to tell...

Oh and you're using quite a few cliches with the goblins and the whole rings\heir of deal... you might want to read through the fanfic cliches thread a bit and see if you recognize anything from there in your own work and see what you can do to try and change that.

--bornagainpenguin (who realizes that he's said quite a lot for someone without anything to say :lol: )

 

Re-run by Selenepotter

Your responce to the threat from Luna's Mom made me laught so much that I have decided to make threats that are both funny and scary a character trait of Luna's mom.
Also, Re-run can be found on fanfiction.net.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2777062/1/

 

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A great story I look forward to reading more of it

 

Re-Union

I have started a sequal called Re-Union and I am opening the universe up in case other writers want to write as pat of the series.

http://www.gringottsvault.com/series.php?seriesid=10

 

not bad, the ending supruised me a bit but hey it was very good.

 

Um... the sequal is very unique... I like the violence and the nuke that spread the Lycanthropy