Author here, adding links for SB | FF.net | WBA

FF.net isn't the most updated, but more polished than the other version in the later chapters. SB is identical to SV. WBA has the most recent chapters that are being edited.

Not going to vote on my own story's For Review thread, for obvious reasons, but I'll take this time to share what I liked and didn't like about my story.

Pros
-AU in the actual sense of the word. It doesn't really follow the stations of canon

-I'm particularly proud of how I wrote Danny and a lot of minor characters here, such as Kaiser, Panacea, Shadow Stalker and others.

-I've made it a point to avoid a plethora of fanon tropes, such as vulpine grins, copacetic and kiddo (seriously fuck this word)

-Technically average writing; i.e. not too many spelling/grammar errors, doesn't overuse adverbs or non-said dialogue tags, doesn't get too purple prose-y etc.

Cons
-Taylor is meh. As an MC, she's not all that compelling in this fic. Not terrible, but
painfully average as far as a main-viewpoint protagonist goes. She has some moments, but for the most part, is overshadowed. This I consider to be one of the biggest flaws of my story.

-A plethora of OCs. Far too many to count, and many insubstantial "filler characters". None of them get much screentime, which is the story's saving grace, but they're not fun to read about

-The pacing, I think, is too fast. On rereading it, there are many places where I should have spent more time and more words fleshing things out.

-Maybe it's because I'm the author, but the ending feels fairly predictable.