Title: Return of the King
Author: wolfwalkerron
Rating: M (R)...NC-17 offsite
Genre: General
Pairing: Slash - HP/OC
Status: WIP
Summary: Post OOTP, AU, Slash, Read prolog,Independant Harry, Evil Dumbledore with a twist. Vernon almost kills Harry but Magic comes to the rescue. The closing of the circle is closer, treachery is revealed
Link: Removed from FF.net but also posted at AFF
http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544200318&chapter=1

OMG READ IT EVEN THOUGH ITS SLASH! All the slashy bits are hosted at his yahoo!group and at slash fic sites so its safe..... Its sort of cliché but its sooooooo goood!!! I love his idea of the city...etc... Its like he ripped them out of my mind! *grumbles and goes in search of occlumency texts*

 

God im retarted, ok ill it a try but if i get slammed in the face with slash, i;m going to learn psionics and rape your mind.

 

Er. . .it looks ok but I think we may need to learn psionics anyway Vecna Even if this story pans out ok we have much work to be done with the other stories that unmarked slash randomly pops up in .

Edit:

Looking over at the bodies of Vernon and Petunia Dursley Ar’Ron looked at them in disgust. “They really should be moved before Harry wakes up. “

“Dobby does it. Dobby take the bad fat man and bad long neck. But where’s Dobby puts them?” Dobby said looking around rapidly.


Wow I just had a land before time flashback :shock:

 

You would probably be gone within the first chapter then. I just started checking it out and already saw a few mentions of erections and harry and other guy admiring each others naked bods.

 

It gets slightly slashy but I think that the story is enough to ignore those parts. It seems that anything past kissing and mentions of erections and whatnot is censored and moved off site. I really like the story though I wish it was hetero, it would be so much better then. It has a few cliches but it is not too bad.

 

LOL, haha told ya. Although now that I read it's 7 chapters I must admit the story does grow on you, if you can withstand the blatant yaoi refrences.

To say nothing of what the deleted scenes must be like since one took place between Harry his lover and their house elves, best I can tell without actually reading the nc-17 content.

 

Personally I couldn’t get passed the prologue, what with even the title being misspelled. Then there was this

Does this make sense to any of you?

 

Now that I think about it, no not really. I'm just used to changing the words in my mind into something that makes sense I often forget it was screwy to begin with.

 

Same as Lunarian for the randomly fixing sentences in my mind and not realizing that it was messed up in the first place. I would suggest that for the people that can stomach mild slash read this story. I personally hate slash but after the 2/3rd chapter the plot starts picking up and the mistakes are less. Later on it gets really good you just have to ignore the slash and stomach the beginning few chapters.

 

WILL NOT READ!!!!



NO SLASH!!!! :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :x :x :x :x :x :x

 

THAAANK YOU...see its still good

 

the fic has been removed from ffn, though why I don't know. They left that fic about Strawberry vanilla Cocoabutterlove and Snape up (see Sick and Perverse). ~shakes head in despair~ if only they would let the folk who run this site take over. It would be SO much better.

The link to it at Adultfan.net is http://www.adultfanfiction.net/aff/story.php?no=544200318&chapter=1

The nly problem with this is that it is not edited of its extreme slash there. So eitehr be good at skippin bits of the story, or be able to ignore/enjoy extreme slash.