Title: Return to Hogwarts
Author: Marj123
Rating: T
Genre: Drama
DLP Category: General
Pairing: Harry/Many
Status: Complete
Summary: It becomes very lonely away from your friends and your world. Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4921229/1/BOOK_2_Return_to_Hogwarts



This story is a bit slow moving. However, despite the slow points I really enjoyed reading the twelve part series.

 

You posted the first part then didn't wait for response before you posted the second part?

I bothered to read the first chapter, TBH the writing is slightly better than before, this means it's upgraded from utter shit to utter crap.

"He wanted his friends." Oh god *gags*

Really go read the responses to the first one that should point out why you shouldn't read the subsequent, in the meantime all that's left to say is:

 

I yearn for the days of neg rep'ing someone for being a general idiot. In any case,I read the first chapter and it's failure. Spelling and so forth seemed to be alright, but the way it's written gives it nothing to hook the reader, thus I give it. 1/5