Oh wow, it's been a long time. I have to be completely honest to say that I forgot about this story. The chapter was good, though. I'll have to re-read the story to follow it completely.

Thanks for continuing it.
(ps: I'm too lazy to review on FFnet, so here you go.)

 

The language and spelling mistakes in this are atrocious. Story is so-so. Seen better in trashbin.

 

I think this is an okay story. Not the best but a good read. I would give it a 3 out of five. Still it is lot better than some of the stories I have read so I will probably keep an eye out for updates.