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WIP Rupert Grint and the Tears of Osiris by Jesse Chen - K

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Jesse Chen, Oct 18, 2019.

1/5, 3 votes
  1. Jesse Chen

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    Oct 18, 2019 #1
    Title: Rupert Grint and the Tears of Osiris
    Author: Jesse Chen
    Rating: K
    Genre: Adventure/Friendship
    Status: In-Progress

    Summary: Daniel Radcliffe loved remembering his time on the set of Harry Potter. One day, while walking through the park, he picked up a fallen branch nearby and swung it with an "Expelliarmus!" A streak of light streamed from the branch and knocked a walker's phone out of their hand.

    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13408693/1/Rupert-Grint-and-the-Tears-of-Osiris

    Hi everyone! This was originally my response to a post on WritingPrompts that blew up. I decided to continue it on my own subreddit, and was hoping to get feedback here. I'm posting new parts daily, and open to any critiques you have. Thanks so much!
     
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    Oct 18, 2019 #2
    Review board isn’t the place for this. We have a work by author section for a reason.
     
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  3. Jesse Chen

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    Oct 18, 2019 #3
    My apologies, I thought I'd read the FAQ but clearly not closely enough. Can we delete this thread?
     
  4. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐

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    Oct 18, 2019 #4
    When you post to WbA you need to post your actual story. This can stay here for review purposes. But if you want constructive feedback and development WbA is the place you want to post about it.

    Generally we don't like when authors submit their own stories to review but it's an easy mistake to make. Don't worry about it.
     
  5. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter ⭐

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    Nov 15, 2019 #5
    Anyone else have any input for this before it gets sorted?