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WIP Salvation in shadow by odev

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by LightLess, Oct 23, 2013.

  1. Drachna

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    I suppose that after all this trouble I should actually review the story, which for whatever reason happens to be one of my favourites in the fandom. I don't imagine that I can raise any points that haven't already been used above, so I'll just say this.

    Salvation in Shadow is a well written power fantasy, with enjoyable fight scenes, appropriately messed up sex scenes for this sort of Dark Harry fic, and a fairly consistent tone throughout the story. Although Harry is a bit OP, I think that the reasons given for his power work in the context of the story without feeling too hamfisted.

    4/5