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Complete Seal Shatter by Quill of Molliemon - T - Naruto

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Prof. Abronsius, May 28, 2009.

3.125/5, 8 votes
  1. Prof. Abronsius

    Prof. Abronsius Guest

    May 28, 2009 #1
    Title: Seal Shatter
    Author: Quill of Molliemon
    Rating: T
    Fandom: Naruto
    Pairing: Minato Namikaze/Kushina Uzumaki

    Chapters: 36
    Words: 125,834
    Updated: September 28, 2009
    Published: April 25, 2009
    Status: Complete

    Summary: AU/AR, mid-Chuunin Exams on. Orochimaru fails to seal the Kyuubi's chakra in the Forest of Death. Naruto interferes with Sasuke's curse mark. And what's wrong with the Hokage?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5016858/1/Seal_Shatter

    Well, the short summary doesn't promise much, but after reading the first two chapters I must say that it is more or less original, even though there isn't much of a plot yet. The author has a solid writing style and seems to know what he's doing. Sadly there are only 6 chapters out yet, though I won't say much more.

    I won't rate it for now, because of the shortage of chapters.


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  2. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    May 28, 2009 #2
    I got all I needed to know from this review:

    Nevertheless, I read the story and I find it stupid.

    Minato and Kushina are alive. Instant fail.

    Didnt the author know that the hero must be orphaned so he can reach his full awesomeness. 2/5
     
  3. LT2000

    LT2000 Heir

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    May 28, 2009 #3
    Moved into For Review.
     
  4. sincostan

    sincostan High Inquisitor

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    May 28, 2009 #4
    Truthfully I stopped reading when I found Kushina and Minato were alive. I'm a little less prejudiced when it's in the summary so I know it's coming, but otherwise I just hate jumping into a story and I don't know what's different and what's the same. I'll give it another go if others have good things to say.
     
  5. ZeroTheDestroyer

    ZeroTheDestroyer Auror

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    May 29, 2009 #5
    What the fuck is this?
     
  6. Apothem

    Apothem Third Year

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    May 29, 2009 #6
    Fairly entertaining - My major issue with this story is that even though Kushina is alive, Naruto somehow managed to fail three times. He's still an idiot, yet it's mentioned that she was training him. I was all like, "...wat?"

    A tentative 3/5 - Decent enough to read when nothing else good is around.
     
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    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    May 30, 2009 #7
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